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December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so much fun! I think I've read this fic 4 times now, and it still gets me hot and bothered. Don't mind the naysayers, this is pretty damn good stuff. Looking forward to updates!
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December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Loved it until the very end!
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December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you're going to continue this story! It's so well done, it would be a shame not to continue.
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
really like the story cant wait for the next chapter
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November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving this story. It's been a while since I've read something so hot! Can't wait to find out what Hermione has in store - please update!
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November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally ship these two, but I absolutely love your story so far!! I hope you update very soon!!!
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November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So, he does not know that it was her. Mmmph, and now he is going to have more time with her in detention. I wonder what it is going to take before he realizes it was her and oh my how will those detentions go now? I know I can't wait.. Yay!
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're old enough to be on this site, because your writing reads like that of a minor, no offense. It's just very....juvenile. Unless you were going for humor or irony, in which case, I suppose it's alright, but I just can't take this fic seriously enough to get into it. Even if it's just smut, it's not that well-written. Hermione sounds like a daft idiot and Severus...well, that's another story. Everything is just wayyy OOC, wish you'd added that to your warnings.
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October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but your writing leaves much to be desired. Instead of getting as inflated an ego as you have on your blog, you ought to take some time to really learn about creative writing versus writing for your law classes. I've read a LOT better fanfic smut than this. Yikes.
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October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've just finshed reading it for the fourth time or so.
This is the kind of erotica I love and there isn't much to read this good.
I think I love you. :D
This is the kind of erotica I love and there isn't much to read this good.
I think I love you. :D