rate_review Reviews

I truely don't know what to say.

This is incredibly touching and intense and amazing.

And I am so very afraid, that you will really let him die. That thought is just unbearable.

If you will really let him die, could you not have Hermione Avada Kedavra him, instead of him dying in such a cruel and humiliating way? But of course, that would put her in Azkaban.

Oh just write on please. The suspense is killing me.

I'm enjoying reading your story. It really sad and sweet. The Ministry putting him in jail seems like a realistic take on what would of happened if he lived. I can see why Severus enjoys Hermione so much. She is a woman who he was cruel to when she was younger but still fought tooth and nail for him. I like that Severus is showing emotion but that also makes it more sad because he will die soon. I look forward to reading more.

I don't want Severus to die !!!!

Amazing story. Will you go into why Hermione is so intent to be there for Severus?

Ohhhhh I think their time together like this was cute! But now I want to know what they'll do with the bed..... :-P
Update soon! ;-P

Let's see: here is a story I thoroughly enjoy (though in a rather heartbroken way), and this being AFFnet...
he gets the relocation program instead of the chair, and you get to keep the credibility of the title AND play with our minds in the process. Correct?

A word of advice: punctuation. :P

This was a wonderfully written chapter. As I was reading it the movie The Green Mile came to mind. I don't know if you have ever seen it but it was an excellent movie dealing with execution by the electric chair. You have truly written this story so well, may I suggest you see it before you write your final scene if you choose to go down that road.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Green_Mile_(novel)

This story is truly heartbreaking and even more so as you have them "enjoy" what little life has to offer at this point in time. I can only hope that at the last moment he will be exonerated.

Looking forward to the next update even if it is with a heavy heart.

Crying. Please don't hurt him. :(

I hope you come up with a good way to end this.

I've never read this type of story, and am really intrigued with the play by play and psychology behind a dying prisoner's last requests. Ooohhhhh if Hermione ever gets time to get her revenge..... but you know that may be another store. Wonder if Kings-y boy will get some come-uppance? There is so much can happen in 24 hours.... thanks for the playfulness that was sweet.

As you know I love all of your stories, but this one seems to have gripped my heart and squeezed hard. I have never felt so bad for a character in a story. Severus is breaking my heart! Hermione is being so brave but I think this just might kill her inside. I'm disliking Kingsly and the Ministry more with each chapter. They've decided one person needs to be vilified and sacrificed and they've chosen Severus! Why the electric chair though? I can't wait for your next chapter!