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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
je sais que tu travail sur l'autre fic et que je suis accro mais je pense a cet fic que j'aime aussi en attente stp ne pas abandonn
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so heartbreaking. It's lovely and feeling. It makes me wish that there was a way for the decision to be reversed.
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I read the rest and I don't think I like you anymore.
Lol.
How could you do this to us! They have to escape, they absolutely have to.
I really, really like this story. It's just so beautifully written. You've written Hermione and Snape in this little cocoon of tenderness and then BAM you write something like that 'procedural description' of the chair and we're reminded that he'll be dead soon. It's just awful. I hate it.
Respect though, for coming up with his execution method. I've always thought The Chair was inhumane (as stupid as that sounds - because capital punishment, right?) and having Wizards, of all people, execute Snape that way when the Killing Curse would have been so much kinder. Yes, I realize how that sounds, but it's true. The Killing Curse would have been quick and painless and less messy. It's an awful way to die and it just underlines how completely unfair the whole damn situation is. Stupid Wizengamot. It's like Fudge's Ministry all over again.
It's a tough story for me to read because I'm a wimp. I hate tragedy, I especially hate reading about it and I've literally come close to tears so many times reading this story. The way you've written Hermione too, is just so incredible. She's shown so much respect and... I dunno... toughness, not crying in front of Snape. Him not shagging her was a bit of a shocker and was such a fresh spin on the whole thing.
The only aspect of your Fic I couldn't quite connect with was how completely comfortable they being nude with each other when they aren't having sex. They're nude so casually. Suppose it's got something to do with my own self-confidence but whatever.
I hate to love this story. If you didn't make me care about your characters so much I'd be a happier person lol.
Lol.
How could you do this to us! They have to escape, they absolutely have to.
I really, really like this story. It's just so beautifully written. You've written Hermione and Snape in this little cocoon of tenderness and then BAM you write something like that 'procedural description' of the chair and we're reminded that he'll be dead soon. It's just awful. I hate it.
Respect though, for coming up with his execution method. I've always thought The Chair was inhumane (as stupid as that sounds - because capital punishment, right?) and having Wizards, of all people, execute Snape that way when the Killing Curse would have been so much kinder. Yes, I realize how that sounds, but it's true. The Killing Curse would have been quick and painless and less messy. It's an awful way to die and it just underlines how completely unfair the whole damn situation is. Stupid Wizengamot. It's like Fudge's Ministry all over again.
It's a tough story for me to read because I'm a wimp. I hate tragedy, I especially hate reading about it and I've literally come close to tears so many times reading this story. The way you've written Hermione too, is just so incredible. She's shown so much respect and... I dunno... toughness, not crying in front of Snape. Him not shagging her was a bit of a shocker and was such a fresh spin on the whole thing.
The only aspect of your Fic I couldn't quite connect with was how completely comfortable they being nude with each other when they aren't having sex. They're nude so casually. Suppose it's got something to do with my own self-confidence but whatever.
I hate to love this story. If you didn't make me care about your characters so much I'd be a happier person lol.
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June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
je ne veux pas que severus meure .Harry d
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story leaves me teary every time. I was so happy that you had updated and now here I am suffering an emotional trauma. Fantastic writing as always and I'm looking forward (bittersweetly) to the next update!
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is just so lovely, my heart aches.
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like that Hermione was dressed in Slytherin colors for Severus. The whole interlude had an intense and relaxing feel to it... I really liked that. I wonder what memories Severus wants stored?
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, why did I start reading this?
The title screams tragedy but still... I clicked on the bloody link and read the first two bloody chapters and now my bloody hearts breaking.
Why did I start reading this!
I'm hoping - foolishly so - that they'll find a way to escape. That this version of Snape won't die because c'mon! How can you let him die?! Haha. How can you be they mean to us lol
I'm actually quite surprised at how good your writing is - no offence it's just a lot of stories on this site are purely lemon based without much thought for the actual writing technique. Well done, well done.
I'm going to read the rest I just had to review now because already I'm hooked on this damn story.
The title screams tragedy but still... I clicked on the bloody link and read the first two bloody chapters and now my bloody hearts breaking.
Why did I start reading this!
I'm hoping - foolishly so - that they'll find a way to escape. That this version of Snape won't die because c'mon! How can you let him die?! Haha. How can you be they mean to us lol
I'm actually quite surprised at how good your writing is - no offence it's just a lot of stories on this site are purely lemon based without much thought for the actual writing technique. Well done, well done.
I'm going to read the rest I just had to review now because already I'm hooked on this damn story.
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Honestly this is a torturous story and I am not sure why I keep reading it...oh wait. Because its good XD Very sad but good.
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand... Well, I understand his motives but I don't...
It's not "fair" of him to deny him AND her this little thing
And I don't want to see him die and you're writting this beautifully :-)
It's not "fair" of him to deny him AND her this little thing
And I don't want to see him die and you're writting this beautifully :-)