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person chelsey
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg so sad and emotional! But oh so delightful that they get ti finally get to be together again.
person pianomouse
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!! :) You have made me so happy! It may not have been what you envisioned, but I love it. Her getting away with saving hi again and getting back at MoM. Perfect.
person lemonade8
schedule August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no!!! They did it! I wonder what her bracelet was all about. I hope she found a way to save him or bring him back. *sigh* I want Kingsley fired/beaten unless he is in on some rescue of some sort.
person Rosajean
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Pretty please let this just all have been a horrid nightmare that she wakes up from in the epilogue. Barring that, I really want her to get revenge or justice or whatever you want to call it. I want them to regret what they've done, the cold hearted bastard Kingsley especially.

P.S. It's really not nice to make me tear up at work. And how am I supposed to talk to clients with a lump in my throat?
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is the most devastating story I have ever read. But it's also so beautiful.
I can't seem to stop crying...
Your way with words is amazing. You created such an intimate bond in only a few chapters.
person james
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have read this a number of times and unfortunately I could easily see this being Snape's fate had he survived or similar. His past was too convoluted, the fact that his hands were tied by Dumbledore and Voldemort would mean nothing with respect to his time as Headmaster. & Bumblebee's [Dumbledore] death.

He knew it in the end of the books - why else would such a powerful wizard not have done anything to defend himself.
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there had been a moment when I didn't cry while reading this story. It's tragically sad and depressing. Please I beg that you skip over the next part where she has to put his body to rest. Instead it hope she is pregnant with his child and that you skip to Hermione with her child reflecting on her memories of her loved one. Please this story needs at least a happier ending.
person Nightqueen
schedule August 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I have cried so much while reading a fic. I decided to start from the beginning again and I went through almost a whole box of Puffs. You are one hell of a writer I don't consider myself vastly over emotional, but crap I do believe I'm completely heartbroken! The last chapter was so painful to finish. I really wanted to do more than punch Kingsley!! You've done one helluva number on my emotions this evening. I look forward to seeing how you wrap up the end in the Epilogue.
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please let her have done something with her bracelet so he is still alive
person chelsey
schedule August 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg never thought id cry so much over this. It was wonderfully written and a beautiful story. I hope hermione actually conceived a child during the union of her and severus. It would be a lovely ti have a loving family even though he is on the afterlife.