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person braye27
schedule November 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

This story is bitter and sweet at the same time.  I afraid to read further, but I would never stop reading because it would haunt me for the rest of my days.

Beth

 

person braye27
schedule November 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I'm getting as frustrated with Severus as Hermione is. LOL! 

Beth

schedule July 24, 2020 at 12:00 AM

you had me crying in chapter 8 i cried all through chaper 9 but was glad on how it ended

person Peahen
schedule June 23, 2019 at 12:00 AM

That was very well written and a pleasure to read.  I was not expecting the happy ending, which made it even better! I wasn’t quite sure of the point of the pensive or killing Kingsley, but that didn’t detract from a beautiful and rather hot tale.  Thank you for writing!

person Lissa
schedule March 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was bloody brilliant. Looooved it!!

person Anonymous
schedule July 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It was desperately sad and beautiful, a slow knife in the heart indeed, and unexpectantly yet graciously so there was a happy ending. One that I did not see coming, I truly thought she was going to end up pregnant with his child, but I do prefer your ending, much less maudlin than what I was preparing myself for. It was lovely.

person Missus_G
schedule April 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank God!!! Heart-rending!
person Wolflover1234
schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I will say it was heart wrenching and I was very made at you killing him but your very forgiven now :)
schedule November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. The ending was awesome after the tears and snotty tissues. Thoroughly enjoyable story, well told too!!
person Sandy
schedule October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you so much for that epilogue! I was sobbing something ugly the previous chapter and thinking about what kind of headcanon to "fix it" with! Hermione is a far better person then I, actually feeling grief for Kingsley.