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September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll say they need to talk. With his power it would be far to easy for har to go mad axe murderer and justify it to himself. I'm glad he has draco their to balance him out. Though how are they going to dump the chickie back if they nick her broom. Leaving her on the island is as good as making snake/shark bait of her. It was pretty stupid of her to attack them though.
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September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like that bit by Tolkien.. :-)
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about #8...
Wooow! O_o
You need to let Harry cut loose like that more often!
Hell, it can also be freeing for the author to let loose
steam every now & then.
Of course, if you don't want to do that here, there are the other stories.
All in all, I liked the intense emotion you gave this.
Also, out of curiosity, do you find yourself feeling you're weak in some
areas in writing? I'm just askin'....
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about #8...
Wooow! O_o
You need to let Harry cut loose like that more often!
Hell, it can also be freeing for the author to let loose
steam every now & then.
Of course, if you don't want to do that here, there are the other stories.
All in all, I liked the intense emotion you gave this.
Also, out of curiosity, do you find yourself feeling you're weak in some
areas in writing? I'm just askin'....
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September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol. Mean to him. *sing song. :P
interesting. har has sadly had a lot of experience with death. were there indeed egg shells on the island or did it merely look like it?
well, charming, the first person they've seen since survivor lady and she's a DE. Is she relying on her wand due to a lack of wild magic or just doesn't want to give herself away? on the plus side, at least the two are likely to get a replacement broom for their group out of it once they've swatted the sow of it like the bug she is.
interesting. har has sadly had a lot of experience with death. were there indeed egg shells on the island or did it merely look like it?
well, charming, the first person they've seen since survivor lady and she's a DE. Is she relying on her wand due to a lack of wild magic or just doesn't want to give herself away? on the plus side, at least the two are likely to get a replacement broom for their group out of it once they've swatted the sow of it like the bug she is.
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September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #7....
Ooo...just when you think you can leave the past it rears its
annoying head. But, I really think the 'person' was mauled by
a creature OR he could have been murdered, dumped in the sea and
some little fish got to nibbling.
Before I forget again, the title 'To the Sea...' where is that from?
Ooo...just when you think you can leave the past it rears its
annoying head. But, I really think the 'person' was mauled by
a creature OR he could have been murdered, dumped in the sea and
some little fish got to nibbling.
Before I forget again, the title 'To the Sea...' where is that from?
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #6...
Snake-shark? Snake-shark...oh my God! Pleeease tell me
that wasn't inspired by that sci fi movie about the
anaconda/shark/octopus or whatever tha' hell it was!
O_O
Even so, that was a nice touch. :-)
Oh, and for the record, I second the idea of Harry & Draco
having a newborn creation that is theirs alone. I'm actually
curious to see how you go about writing that out.
Snake-shark? Snake-shark...oh my God! Pleeease tell me
that wasn't inspired by that sci fi movie about the
anaconda/shark/octopus or whatever tha' hell it was!
O_O
Even so, that was a nice touch. :-)
Oh, and for the record, I second the idea of Harry & Draco
having a newborn creation that is theirs alone. I'm actually
curious to see how you go about writing that out.
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, that was certainly dramatic. I wonder who that poor colonist was. Still, with Draco's claws and har's winds critters would be har pressed indeed to take them out. it's a pity they can't just live on air and magic. :P
I think it would take more than just two of them, no matter how powerful, to call the magic for baby making. on the plus side at least every mummi child knows that it's a wanted desired entity. there's no such thing as an accident... likely the same if humans figure how to make it work.
I think it would take more than just two of them, no matter how powerful, to call the magic for baby making. on the plus side at least every mummi child knows that it's a wanted desired entity. there's no such thing as an accident... likely the same if humans figure how to make it work.
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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah will Draco and Harry create their own child at some point. Witnessing something like that occurring between two males attached by wild magic seems to point them in that direction. Also, I can't help but wonder if they'll decide to move their encampment closer to the ocean. I don't know how much work that would take as they would have the green house plants to move with them. I guess they still wield wizard magic, so they could shrink things and pack much like they did before arriving on Hurricane.
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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #5..
Wooow, now THAT was different. Is that something ANY being on
Hurricane can do, if they are affected by wild magic [hint..hint]?
;-)
Wooow, now THAT was different. Is that something ANY being on
Hurricane can do, if they are affected by wild magic [hint..hint]?
;-)
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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
righty, this is a test review to see if it'll let me review again or not.
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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
sorry for the previous lack of review... i very foolishly decided it was late and i'd review in the morning... only to find the site had crashed. >>
I'm glad har and draco are getting closer, becoming more of a unit. It's what they need and not just for survival.
Anyway, Wow! that's utterly amazing. I wondered how the Mummi's would do that since it takes two or three or more to make a person. So, if a 'person' wants a child they perform the dance to become the focus of their flocks power until a new individual is created... that's utterly awesome. And Hurricane's magic celebrates all births/life creations? I doubt the humans can muster that sort of cohesion/power yet so they'll probably have to stick to the old fashioned way.
I'm glad har and draco are getting closer, becoming more of a unit. It's what they need and not just for survival.
Anyway, Wow! that's utterly amazing. I wondered how the Mummi's would do that since it takes two or three or more to make a person. So, if a 'person' wants a child they perform the dance to become the focus of their flocks power until a new individual is created... that's utterly awesome. And Hurricane's magic celebrates all births/life creations? I doubt the humans can muster that sort of cohesion/power yet so they'll probably have to stick to the old fashioned way.