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November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
heh, figured as much. still, oooh, a map. made by whom and for what purpose.
that last line was full of foreboding. I hope the ppl back at base camp are able to baton down the hatches in time. har has his own winds but will they be enough to counter things. working in tandom with draco they might be if they can find a good place to anchor things. i look forward to seeing if/when ron and mio start manifesting.
that last line was full of foreboding. I hope the ppl back at base camp are able to baton down the hatches in time. har has his own winds but will they be enough to counter things. working in tandom with draco they might be if they can find a good place to anchor things. i look forward to seeing if/when ron and mio start manifesting.
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November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #16...
1. I was expecting much longer breaks between the chapters, to show them
living years on Hurricane..
Well the only way to 'show' that is to give us the 'feeling' it has been
years by simply saying the typical 'months passed and still...etc etc', you
know what I mean? Like you did in this chapter...
2. ...and I simply loved the bow that's all, it was completely aristocratic.
Perfect for a pureblood.
3. You know, when I think about it, this story almost has a Edgar Rice Burrough, without
the dinosaurs and with a little "Mysterious Island'' mixed in...very intriguing. How many times
have I said that?
ANyway, keep up the good work.
1. I was expecting much longer breaks between the chapters, to show them
living years on Hurricane..
Well the only way to 'show' that is to give us the 'feeling' it has been
years by simply saying the typical 'months passed and still...etc etc', you
know what I mean? Like you did in this chapter...
2. ...and I simply loved the bow that's all, it was completely aristocratic.
Perfect for a pureblood.
3. You know, when I think about it, this story almost has a Edgar Rice Burrough, without
the dinosaurs and with a little "Mysterious Island'' mixed in...very intriguing. How many times
have I said that?
ANyway, keep up the good work.
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #15...
1. Well, which way were you expecting to go? Because the story thus
far continues in the same vein from the last story, without losing its continuity, unless
you were hoping to 'up the ante'? So far, it's intriguing...
2. For Draco, to be 'gleeful' makes me think you watch a certain TV show. :-)
3. Did you make that bow up or was it inspired?
1. Well, which way were you expecting to go? Because the story thus
far continues in the same vein from the last story, without losing its continuity, unless
you were hoping to 'up the ante'? So far, it's intriguing...
2. For Draco, to be 'gleeful' makes me think you watch a certain TV show. :-)
3. Did you make that bow up or was it inspired?
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I was sad it was shorter, but really it just means I was left drooling for more so, no complaints! I am very intrigued by their findings so far, is the silver thing a void of some sort? I wonder if it breaks up the actual molecules or if it's more like a vanishing spell? I suppose either way whatever is absorbed becomes a part of the oval? So when you said that we may meet more hurricane humans later on... could they come from hurricane?! The drawings, especially the map Draco was evaluating were mega creepy! There's some pretty deep magic going on there if you don't mind me assuming. :) So excited for next chapter!
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this just gets more and more interesting. so hurricane may have had previous inhabitants... where'd they go and why? What does this have to do with whatever force is stirring things up from the north. if they could fly, why were they content to sent in a small village? They certainly left behind a dangerous thing or three. i look forward to finding out the answers to these Q's in later chappies.
well, at least draco is aware of that particular emotional quirk so he can keep an eye on it.
well, at least draco is aware of that particular emotional quirk so he can keep an eye on it.
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October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i think they might both be a little broken, but it's nothing they can't heal from, together.
hmmm, a call to arms? well, good grief... as if hurricane doesn't have enough curve balls to throw at them already, bodiless malevolence? what did the mummies do to draw that down on their heads... if they did anything.
well damn, they're being all human and accepting and stuff. it will be interesting to see how har and draco react on this road trip with the golden trio reformed.
hmmm, a call to arms? well, good grief... as if hurricane doesn't have enough curve balls to throw at them already, bodiless malevolence? what did the mummies do to draw that down on their heads... if they did anything.
well damn, they're being all human and accepting and stuff. it will be interesting to see how har and draco react on this road trip with the golden trio reformed.
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October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #14...
Well damn, this chapter should have been called 'The Negotiation'.
So, was there an understanding reached besides the one between the
Quartet, since I think they no longer can be called the Trio.
I see Charlie making an attempt, but will it still be a while, before
anything is solid? Personally, I think it's time for a chain of command.
Is that where you are headed? Oh, and we will be able to see that mock
flight Harry gives Hermione right? :-)
Besides that, I think you are pacing this nicely.
Well damn, this chapter should have been called 'The Negotiation'.
So, was there an understanding reached besides the one between the
Quartet, since I think they no longer can be called the Trio.
I see Charlie making an attempt, but will it still be a while, before
anything is solid? Personally, I think it's time for a chain of command.
Is that where you are headed? Oh, and we will be able to see that mock
flight Harry gives Hermione right? :-)
Besides that, I think you are pacing this nicely.
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm dying to know about Bodiless and what they will do with a new enemy! Do you think we'll be meeting any more of Hurricane's human inhabitants in this story? I'm very curious about how all the different groups are holding up! :)
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
#13 con't ...
To be clear about what I mean about a one shot about the
two, it just seems like there is a closeness between the two
already and I just wanted to see the pov from her side.
To be clear about what I mean about a one shot about the
two, it just seems like there is a closeness between the two
already and I just wanted to see the pov from her side.
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October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #13...
1. You know what, I had one of my random thoughts [big shocker] and
I can't help but think...why not do a one shot on Ginny & her bird?
The way you speak about them and the vibe I get when I read a paragraph
or two..I assume in a way is a reflection of you & your little feather
duster [j/k]. :-)
I was thinking as the bird gets bigger, what are Ginny' thoughts? Anyway,
it's a random thought..
annnnddd...
2. Well now, we're starting to get deep into the story with a bit of intrigue
and slight noir. By the way, how many chapters you got left for this?
1. You know what, I had one of my random thoughts [big shocker] and
I can't help but think...why not do a one shot on Ginny & her bird?
The way you speak about them and the vibe I get when I read a paragraph
or two..I assume in a way is a reflection of you & your little feather
duster [j/k]. :-)
I was thinking as the bird gets bigger, what are Ginny' thoughts? Anyway,
it's a random thought..
annnnddd...
2. Well now, we're starting to get deep into the story with a bit of intrigue
and slight noir. By the way, how many chapters you got left for this?