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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #20...
I was thinking..what would you call a tribe like that? I was playing with
the word Avians. Well it DOES fit.
Anyway, yes Harry almost screwed up, 'eager beaver' is his middle name, but
when you think about it, he is not used to sitting still, he really needs the
action in his life. I say let him have it, within reason. Of course, that's
where Draco comes in...his balance & to make sure he doesn't overdo it.
Anyway, that was a good chapter...and nice job on the action. Who knows maybe
we'll get a Quidditch story out of you soon. :-)
I was thinking..what would you call a tribe like that? I was playing with
the word Avians. Well it DOES fit.
Anyway, yes Harry almost screwed up, 'eager beaver' is his middle name, but
when you think about it, he is not used to sitting still, he really needs the
action in his life. I say let him have it, within reason. Of course, that's
where Draco comes in...his balance & to make sure he doesn't overdo it.
Anyway, that was a good chapter...and nice job on the action. Who knows maybe
we'll get a Quidditch story out of you soon. :-)
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December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
bum bump buuuuuuuuuuuuuum!
well, riders hint at sentience... and sentience mean that hopefully they can talk and maybe get some answers... if the riders don't try to kill them first. >> working in ignorance is never fun.
well, riders hint at sentience... and sentience mean that hopefully they can talk and maybe get some answers... if the riders don't try to kill them first. >> working in ignorance is never fun.
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December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #19...
...and I'm with Draco on that one, it does seem like Harry debates on Draco's
wisdom, but OH...let Hermione say something and it's automatically the voice
of messianic proportions.
So, those creatures, are they like a cross between a hippogriff & ram?
You know, I'm not sure if you realize it but you're really at the cusp of creating
your own world here, which needs names for places so it will be easier to explain to
people back at the camp. For example, they just came from flying over Oval Valley.
How's that for a name, since eventually a map will have to be made.
Oh, and for the record, this is really good, like a fantasy book. :-)
...and I'm with Draco on that one, it does seem like Harry debates on Draco's
wisdom, but OH...let Hermione say something and it's automatically the voice
of messianic proportions.
So, those creatures, are they like a cross between a hippogriff & ram?
You know, I'm not sure if you realize it but you're really at the cusp of creating
your own world here, which needs names for places so it will be easier to explain to
people back at the camp. For example, they just came from flying over Oval Valley.
How's that for a name, since eventually a map will have to be made.
Oh, and for the record, this is really good, like a fantasy book. :-)
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That's a handy gift! A map to wild magic, that's wonderful. I can't wait to read more.
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November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #18...
1. Big question...in this part of the story, what is the main focus/theme?
Despite the fact there is a mystery in the horizon. I have an idea, but I want
to see what you have in mind.
2. Will Draco & Harry come clean in 'words' (spoken out loud) how they truly feel
for the other? Because right now, it seems like they are going thru the motions,
but the actual words have yet to be said.
1. Big question...in this part of the story, what is the main focus/theme?
Despite the fact there is a mystery in the horizon. I have an idea, but I want
to see what you have in mind.
2. Will Draco & Harry come clean in 'words' (spoken out loud) how they truly feel
for the other? Because right now, it seems like they are going thru the motions,
but the actual words have yet to be said.
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November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that's pretty ironic. mio the bookworm, living wild magic detector. ^^
hmmm, maybe ron will be like an anti wild magic person. someone it can't develop in or something, so he won't be quite as effected by calls and other such foibles associated with it. or not, i look forward to seeing how it works.
hmmm, maybe ron will be like an anti wild magic person. someone it can't develop in or something, so he won't be quite as effected by calls and other such foibles associated with it. or not, i look forward to seeing how it works.
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November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and erie! Whatever this force is, it gives me the willies. The fact that it wants Draco to bring Harry, but that Harry did not hear anything about Draco.... is the force just using Draco to get to Harry? Or could the messages be coming from two seperate sources?! I am waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!
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November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about 17...
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November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
now that's just plain worrying. two, three different calls, but from whom and why. especially if they have the power to direct the birds and the storms... and block each other from a bonded's mind. At least neither was senseless enough to have attempted to answer it.
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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very cool! I didn't even think of that. I wonder if this is a natural storm or if they are about to meet their newest enemy... or friend. What I love about this is that you never know what's comming... the joy and mystery of a completely new world :) can't wait for more.