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January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well bugger. that was down right stupid of her. i mean seriously. does she think she can survive alone? not to mention har came to this world FOR teddy. har's not going to just let that lay. yeah, she's toast.
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January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
.... holy shit. Can we kill her. I think that was the first time I have really hated a character in this story. Remus and Tonks died to protect their friends, who are all right there! Please please please tell me they catch her before she tries to go back through the gate?!
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January 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Now Andromeda has done it for real. I really wonder how Harry is going to react when he discovers her disappearance. Honestly, Andromeda annoys me a little. I hope Harry will take her down a few pecks if he manages to find her - or if she returns.
I think this is the first time (well of all your stories I read anyway) where you really left it hanging at a sort of cliffhanger. I both like and dislike it LOL But I'm guilty of using cliffhangers a lot in my stories so I suppose I have no right complaining LOL XD
Very curious to the next update :D
I think this is the first time (well of all your stories I read anyway) where you really left it hanging at a sort of cliffhanger. I both like and dislike it LOL But I'm guilty of using cliffhangers a lot in my stories so I suppose I have no right complaining LOL XD
Very curious to the next update :D
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December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your writing! I just spent hours reading Reap the Hurricane and then this and I've read some of your other work as well... though I admit that I tend to avoid it during my school year because of the amount of time it takes me to read it if I get caught up in it... and I will get caught up. Anyway, I don't usually read your stuff on aff, but I thought I'd leave a review here anyway. Great job! I love the created world and the depth that you give even to your minor characters. I like your descriptions of Teddy, Andromeda, and Ginny. You have the ability to make characters not just likable but realistic in a way that the reader has to make up their own mind as to whether they like a character or not because the intended reaction is not expicit in the writing - I hope that made sense. One question though: in everything I can remember reading from you, when you write Harry and Draco in intimate scenes it tends to be with top!Draco (for a lack of better description) and I was wondering if this was just your preference or if maybe there is a reason (in this fic or others) that I just haven't gotten. I freely admit that I prefer to read it the other way, or at least read it with more versatility and sometimes it does stop me from continuing (though your plots are more than intriguing enough to encourage me to continue). Anyway, I've clearly been up far to late and should probably try to get something that at least resembles sleep tonight, but I wanted to review since I went so many chapters without it, and tell you how much I'm enjoying this work and how much I admire you as a devoted author in general. Can't wait to read more!!!
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December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, well, a truce of a sort is better than nothing yeah?
that was a close one... still, draco didn't enjoy his time as a voldi minion so i doubt he'd enjoy being bodiless's. besides, what good is power if you can only direct it at another beings say so?
hmmm, so bodiless isn't used to dealing with pair bonded beings, who are both individual and coupled at the same time. fascinating.
heee, i picked it without reading the next chappie first. still, it would explain a lot. bonds are NEEDED as a defense against bodiless. i wonder how many poor, unprepared earthling saps bodiless has nommed. they'd so be easy meat.
lol, bodiless really does NOT want to call ron to it. not if he's a null wild magic wizard/ magician type person. the idea that their concentrated desire is what triggers their particular gift is most interesting. i hope that gets explored a bit more.
that was a close one... still, draco didn't enjoy his time as a voldi minion so i doubt he'd enjoy being bodiless's. besides, what good is power if you can only direct it at another beings say so?
hmmm, so bodiless isn't used to dealing with pair bonded beings, who are both individual and coupled at the same time. fascinating.
heee, i picked it without reading the next chappie first. still, it would explain a lot. bonds are NEEDED as a defense against bodiless. i wonder how many poor, unprepared earthling saps bodiless has nommed. they'd so be easy meat.
lol, bodiless really does NOT want to call ron to it. not if he's a null wild magic wizard/ magician type person. the idea that their concentrated desire is what triggers their particular gift is most interesting. i hope that gets explored a bit more.
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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #22...
I wish I could draw well, because I would definitely do the scene where Hermione
is glaring & Draco is sitting all smug with that "Eternal Smirk' of his. :-)
Anyway, yeah! That idea about the bond hit me when Harry was fighting that Huge Puff
of Air to get to Draco..and when I think about it, that was the biggest hint you gave
us. If no one else got it, oh well...
I kinda figured that was the issue with Ginevra & her bird, but you explained it already.
I have to say it, but I wish this and Reign of Silence were the only 2 stories you were
doing so we could get up dates every 3 days. :-)
..and it's good to see Ron 'hanging with the big boys' now.
I wish I could draw well, because I would definitely do the scene where Hermione
is glaring & Draco is sitting all smug with that "Eternal Smirk' of his. :-)
Anyway, yeah! That idea about the bond hit me when Harry was fighting that Huge Puff
of Air to get to Draco..and when I think about it, that was the biggest hint you gave
us. If no one else got it, oh well...
I kinda figured that was the issue with Ginevra & her bird, but you explained it already.
I have to say it, but I wish this and Reign of Silence were the only 2 stories you were
doing so we could get up dates every 3 days. :-)
..and it's good to see Ron 'hanging with the big boys' now.
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was beautiful. Here again love is stronger than a malicious force. I am so curious about the riders! Can't wait for more!
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December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #21..
First of all, I want to squeal like a girl, but I won't...
Second of all, I want to leap up & down in glee like an insane
jackrabbit when Harry rushed to Draco's rescue, but I ain't...
Third of all, I want to say that was some DAMN good s*** to read,
the best excitement thus far, but I'm not going to...
Fourth of all, I want to say I'm guessing that's why the mumm's act
in pairs, because of an ingrained survival instinct against a force that
is stronger than them & they fight better in pairs, but I shan't..
I'm just going to calmly walk away and say...good job. ;-)
First of all, I want to squeal like a girl, but I won't...
Second of all, I want to leap up & down in glee like an insane
jackrabbit when Harry rushed to Draco's rescue, but I ain't...
Third of all, I want to say that was some DAMN good s*** to read,
the best excitement thus far, but I'm not going to...
Fourth of all, I want to say I'm guessing that's why the mumm's act
in pairs, because of an ingrained survival instinct against a force that
is stronger than them & they fight better in pairs, but I shan't..
I'm just going to calmly walk away and say...good job. ;-)
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December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #21..
First of all, I want to squeal like a girl, but I won't...
Second of all, I want to leap up & down in glee like an insane
jackrabbit when Harry rushed to Draco's rescue, but I ain't...
Third of all, I want to say that was some DAMN good s*** to read,
the best excitement thus far, but I'm not going to...
Fourth of all, I want to say I'm guessing that's why the mumm's act
in pairs, because of an ingrained survival instinct against a force that
is stronger than them & they fight better as a unit, but I shan't..
I'm just going to calmly walk away and say...good job. ;-)
First of all, I want to squeal like a girl, but I won't...
Second of all, I want to leap up & down in glee like an insane
jackrabbit when Harry rushed to Draco's rescue, but I ain't...
Third of all, I want to say that was some DAMN good s*** to read,
the best excitement thus far, but I'm not going to...
Fourth of all, I want to say I'm guessing that's why the mumm's act
in pairs, because of an ingrained survival instinct against a force that
is stronger than them & they fight better as a unit, but I shan't..
I'm just going to calmly walk away and say...good job. ;-)
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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, or not. still, a bit hair trigger there har. still, at least that lot won't mess with them again in a hurry.
glad draco is there to pull har back from his potential killy killy spree, and that mio was able to sort of shock him out of it. guess a history of being the brains really helps. :P
glad draco is there to pull har back from his potential killy killy spree, and that mio was able to sort of shock him out of it. guess a history of being the brains really helps. :P