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February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
tch. i keep missing your up dates.
draco does seem like decent dad material.
u know, for an alliance, har's mob don't seem to be getting much out of this beyond being the mummi's trouble shooters... tho knowing what those ovals do is a useful bit of knowledge.
draco does seem like decent dad material.
u know, for an alliance, har's mob don't seem to be getting much out of this beyond being the mummi's trouble shooters... tho knowing what those ovals do is a useful bit of knowledge.
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February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about @27...
1. Damn, I'm not even in the story with them and I got frustrated
trying to figure out ''wha tha' hell are they trying to say?'' :-)
2. So, they're off to travel to Oval Valley and is it just me or is
Draco getting that sure of himself that this baby creation is SURELY
going to happen without thinking that there might be problems? It would
be ironic if he wound up carrying because something went haywire. :-)
But, it would be nice to ''see'' if their creation comes from some type of dance.
Have you thought of how you're going to do it?
1. Damn, I'm not even in the story with them and I got frustrated
trying to figure out ''wha tha' hell are they trying to say?'' :-)
2. So, they're off to travel to Oval Valley and is it just me or is
Draco getting that sure of himself that this baby creation is SURELY
going to happen without thinking that there might be problems? It would
be ironic if he wound up carrying because something went haywire. :-)
But, it would be nice to ''see'' if their creation comes from some type of dance.
Have you thought of how you're going to do it?
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January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I find it a bit funny how Hermione and Draco seem to agree on the subject of Andromeda and Harry forgiving her for pulling a stunt like that. Never thought they would one day agree with each other on something.
It's also interesting to see how set Draco is on having a child together - usually in other stories it's Harry who's more open to the idea of children and not Draco (though I have to admit that I made a story where Draco is also more set on it than Harry but I suppose stories like those are in the minority). It seems Harry has giving up at the moment on trying to convince Draco to not pursue the thought of children - he probably considers it a pointless argument at this point LOL
I'm curious as to why they need to go to that place, but I assume that will be explained in the next chapter.
As always a great chapter!
It's also interesting to see how set Draco is on having a child together - usually in other stories it's Harry who's more open to the idea of children and not Draco (though I have to admit that I made a story where Draco is also more set on it than Harry but I suppose stories like those are in the minority). It seems Harry has giving up at the moment on trying to convince Draco to not pursue the thought of children - he probably considers it a pointless argument at this point LOL
I'm curious as to why they need to go to that place, but I assume that will be explained in the next chapter.
As always a great chapter!
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January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #26...
You know, it's good to know that with all the craziness, the changes,
& the drama, Draco will NEVER change, if he can help it. :-)
You know, it's good to know that with all the craziness, the changes,
& the drama, Draco will NEVER change, if he can help it. :-)
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
now that was really stupid of her. She had to have know har wasn't just going to let that slide. and to try and go back through the gate when she didn't know if they could or not is just suicidal.
most interesting. i wonder how long it takes before return is not an option. if they've adapted, does that mean they aren't strictly human anymore. talent built on the first driving desire a person has... i wonder what teddy's was?
no way she can deny it now, poor old girl.
most interesting. i wonder how long it takes before return is not an option. if they've adapted, does that mean they aren't strictly human anymore. talent built on the first driving desire a person has... i wonder what teddy's was?
no way she can deny it now, poor old girl.
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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing this! Its a wonderful story and I can't wait for the next bit of it. Seeing all of these different relationships melt together ands change people is really brilliant. Of course the romance is nice too. But the plots and structure really set your stories apart.
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god she didn't manage to escape. Mind, I still would have enjoyed the story - you have a way of inserting little twists in your stories that make them even more fascinating to read - but meh, it's probably my dislike of Andromeda showing true LOL
It's nice to read how Draco is at least trying to be a bit nicer, even if he wants to gain something through it - his Slytherin side taking over I presume.
I still think Harry forgave Andromeda a bit too quickly, but he is more of a forgiving nature (shown by the times he forgave Ron when he abandoned him) so I guess that's natural.
And Andromeda's new power is interesting. So if I understood it right, she basically can create a space to hide in whenever she wants now?
Anyway, as always a great chapter! Looking forward to the next one :)
It's nice to read how Draco is at least trying to be a bit nicer, even if he wants to gain something through it - his Slytherin side taking over I presume.
I still think Harry forgave Andromeda a bit too quickly, but he is more of a forgiving nature (shown by the times he forgave Ron when he abandoned him) so I guess that's natural.
And Andromeda's new power is interesting. So if I understood it right, she basically can create a space to hide in whenever she wants now?
Anyway, as always a great chapter! Looking forward to the next one :)
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January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #25...
Hah! It's almost like sweet revenge! So, WHAT is she going to do now that
she is like the others. :-)
...and I'm curious have you thought of how the ritual is going to go between
H & D when you decide to do what the Mumms have done? Because at this point
I'm curious.
..AND I liked that sorta semi-story Harry told Draco about Tonks, though you would
think he would have a bit more to add.
Hah! It's almost like sweet revenge! So, WHAT is she going to do now that
she is like the others. :-)
...and I'm curious have you thought of how the ritual is going to go between
H & D when you decide to do what the Mumms have done? Because at this point
I'm curious.
..AND I liked that sorta semi-story Harry told Draco about Tonks, though you would
think he would have a bit more to add.
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January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I think this cliffhanger is worse than the last one LOL They probably should have seen that move coming, but I suppose they hadn't expected it of her. Can't Harry just pick Teddy up with his winds or so while Draco makes his claws longer (I think he can do that, no? If I remember correctly anyway) to stop Andromeda? I thought that was the first thing Harry would do, picking up Teddy with his winds. Or he could blast Andromeda back I suppose.
Anyway like always a great chapter :) Your chapters remind me every time of why you're one of my most favourite authors here and on fanfiction
Anyway like always a great chapter :) Your chapters remind me every time of why you're one of my most favourite authors here and on fanfiction
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January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
#24..
..and she does a cliffhanger, just as it gets to the good part.
..and she does a cliffhanger, just as it gets to the good part.