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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very nice ending to this interesting story. It was also interesting to read that Harry received Bodiless' power now - at first I feared Hermione would tell them that Harry had acquired some sort of illness that would lead to him being paralyzed or so (don't ask me how I came up with that farfetched thought - sometimes I don't know how my brain works) so I'm glad it was something entirely else.
I'm curious to the next installment and will definitely read that one as well :) Will it be a long oneshot (like you sometimes have done to other stories), a short story or a long story? Just curious :) Anyway, looking forward to the sequel of this!
I'm curious to the next installment and will definitely read that one as well :) Will it be a long oneshot (like you sometimes have done to other stories), a short story or a long story? Just curious :) Anyway, looking forward to the sequel of this!
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about the end..
I get a weird feeling for HArry, regarding what happened to him
AND I can't wait to see how u do this child bearing thing. Should
be interesting.
But I'm glad they found their place in the world finally...all of them
for now.
Other than that, this was a WONDERFUL sequel, with its adventures and different
Hurricane habitants.
I get a weird feeling for HArry, regarding what happened to him
AND I can't wait to see how u do this child bearing thing. Should
be interesting.
But I'm glad they found their place in the world finally...all of them
for now.
Other than that, this was a WONDERFUL sequel, with its adventures and different
Hurricane habitants.
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #30...
1. How is that Andromeda is...slime??? O_o
2. I really liked how you described ''Ginny. Charlie. George. Angelina. Percy..and
the others'' when they were bonded through Harry & Draco. It gave the feeling that
for a moment ALL of them were a unit, with no misunderstandings or strife between them.
Oh, and to read that Harry 'sang'...wish he would do it regularly. Now that's a story
idea you haven't explored.
...and lastly, I gotta say that was one HELL of an ending. :-)
1. How is that Andromeda is...slime??? O_o
2. I really liked how you described ''Ginny. Charlie. George. Angelina. Percy..and
the others'' when they were bonded through Harry & Draco. It gave the feeling that
for a moment ALL of them were a unit, with no misunderstandings or strife between them.
Oh, and to read that Harry 'sang'...wish he would do it regularly. Now that's a story
idea you haven't explored.
...and lastly, I gotta say that was one HELL of an ending. :-)
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March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ooo I just love this story! And it just gets better. Thanks so much.
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March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* *clears throat* I kind of had forgotten that Percy had come with them *sheepishly smiles* Sorry, that had nothing to do with your writing skills, I just didn't remember him for a moment. My fault.
Does the ending of this chapter mean that Bodiless is defeated? Or did it just retreat to gain its strength back?
Anyway, as always a great chapter :D
Does the ending of this chapter mean that Bodiless is defeated? Or did it just retreat to gain its strength back?
Anyway, as always a great chapter :D
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Harry finally told Bill what he thinks of his constant doubt of him. It was time he finally told him off - like Harry said, it's his choice if he comes with them, but he shouldn't complain about every little thing that happens.
Hermione annoys me a bit with her constant need for being everywhere where something interesting is happening, but she's fine in general.
I do wonder what is going to happen now though.
Great chapter!
Hermione annoys me a bit with her constant need for being everywhere where something interesting is happening, but she's fine in general.
I do wonder what is going to happen now though.
Great chapter!
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #29...
1. I know I've asked this...but I'm drawing a blank here. The Mumm's...do they have the
appearance of a ram? Because I keep picturing them as sheep and that doesn't really
seem to do them justice or give them a powerful enough appearance, considering what they
can do.
2. Do the Mumms fight? Have a hard time seeing that of them, unless they have powerful hooves.
[does it bother you that I say Mumms, let me know]
3. Whu'!!??!! You mean that Nasty Puff of Wind 'that ain't got no body' is trying to pick a fight with them?
Oh the arrogance!
Kinda makes me wonder if there's more to That Nasty Puff of Wind that you aren't telling, it could be a creature
for all we know... <_<
1. I know I've asked this...but I'm drawing a blank here. The Mumm's...do they have the
appearance of a ram? Because I keep picturing them as sheep and that doesn't really
seem to do them justice or give them a powerful enough appearance, considering what they
can do.
2. Do the Mumms fight? Have a hard time seeing that of them, unless they have powerful hooves.
[does it bother you that I say Mumms, let me know]
3. Whu'!!??!! You mean that Nasty Puff of Wind 'that ain't got no body' is trying to pick a fight with them?
Oh the arrogance!
Kinda makes me wonder if there's more to That Nasty Puff of Wind that you aren't telling, it could be a creature
for all we know... <_<
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February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #28..
Wow, I think we actually had a chapter where Harry & Draco actually didn't
have to do anything, just sit back & wait to see if the fireworks would happen.
1. Where did you get the inspiration to do that scene between the riders & the
mummidades [I finally spelled their name right] meeting each other in the air?
It was different.
2. I agree with Draco 'Darkness in the North' does sound cooler than Bodiless. :-/
All in all, not much happened here, but it was still interesting.
Wow, I think we actually had a chapter where Harry & Draco actually didn't
have to do anything, just sit back & wait to see if the fireworks would happen.
1. Where did you get the inspiration to do that scene between the riders & the
mummidades [I finally spelled their name right] meeting each other in the air?
It was different.
2. I agree with Draco 'Darkness in the North' does sound cooler than Bodiless. :-/
All in all, not much happened here, but it was still interesting.
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February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Seems that for once Harry is the patient one and Draco the impatient one. XD
At least they made a connection - that's something I guess. Now it's waiting for the decision of the one party.
Like always, a very interesting chapter ^^ And hey, Draco for once didn't mention children LOL
At least they made a connection - that's something I guess. Now it's waiting for the decision of the one party.
Like always, a very interesting chapter ^^ And hey, Draco for once didn't mention children LOL
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February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So the Mummidade originally used those ovals as transport until Bodiless made them disappear? Interesting.
I find the names you come up with fascinating as well - as someone who always has trouble coming up with original names and even original spells, I'm jealous of the way you can come up with different names all the time. At the same time I do admire you for that.
Like always it was interesting to read!
I find the names you come up with fascinating as well - as someone who always has trouble coming up with original names and even original spells, I'm jealous of the way you can come up with different names all the time. At the same time I do admire you for that.
Like always it was interesting to read!