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by withdemonwings

person thrnbrooke
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I soooo enjoyed that!
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes it is so refreashing to read a story where the plot is twisted and turned like this one. Very well written and very enjoyable:-))
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cute, as a oneshot it was a little...odd, it felt more like part of a larger story, as if you had summarized it and shoved it all into this one single chapter and left more questions floating around as i read... like how was harry snape's son? how did charlie and lucius get to together? how did harry and draco get together? hell, how did snape and remus get together? good idea, just wish you could have expanded on it more, given the whole backstory instead of the final chapter.
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I look forward to more. Great start! Or was it a one-shot?