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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since i reviewed this story and i must say i greatly enjoy where you have taken it. Harry is still Harry despite having the Malfoy name, he is sticking up for himself a lot more now and has more freedom to do what he wants. Not too jived on the prospect of Lucius getting released though. His circumstances are VASTLY different from his Wife and son's and i don't believe he even finished serving his time for the Ministry battle debacle and in the off chance he does get released should at least have his magic bound.I understand that Narcissa cares deeply for her husband but she needs to remember that he has committed some very evil deeds and even if Harry actually got him released,which would be much harder now that he has severed ties with the Ministry, it could very well be the straw that brakes the camels back with his friends.
love the story and will read regardless of the route you take.
-waits patiently for next update-
love the story and will read regardless of the route you take.
-waits patiently for next update-
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Haven't left a review for this story in a while, so I thought i would leave you one.
I am very much enjoying this story, though the pace and style are very different from most others I have read, in a good way. It is very steady and calm for the most part which makes for an interesting read and I particularly love the detailed way you are evolving the relationship between them. I am slightly surprised that Narcissa was as hostile as she was, but it does make sense and didn't feel out of place or character at all.
Keep the chapters coming, I am always glad to see a new one for this story.
I am very much enjoying this story, though the pace and style are very different from most others I have read, in a good way. It is very steady and calm for the most part which makes for an interesting read and I particularly love the detailed way you are evolving the relationship between them. I am slightly surprised that Narcissa was as hostile as she was, but it does make sense and didn't feel out of place or character at all.
Keep the chapters coming, I am always glad to see a new one for this story.
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #33...
1. *tries to calm down author's ruffled feathers* O__O
Nooo...I wasn't trying to imply nothing between them hasn't been good so
far, heck I happen to like the intimate moments between them. I was
just asking when will they cross that threshold of physical intimacy?
2. I liked the confrontation between Harry & Narcissa. Harry handled himself
beautifully, the way a mature, adult and trained Auror should.
..and does Harry get what Draco is trying to say or does Draco need a sledgehammer???
1. *tries to calm down author's ruffled feathers* O__O
Nooo...I wasn't trying to imply nothing between them hasn't been good so
far, heck I happen to like the intimate moments between them. I was
just asking when will they cross that threshold of physical intimacy?
2. I liked the confrontation between Harry & Narcissa. Harry handled himself
beautifully, the way a mature, adult and trained Auror should.
..and does Harry get what Draco is trying to say or does Draco need a sledgehammer???
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter... I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am referring to Blaise...yet even they get some enemies off, they are still unsure who stabbed Draco...right?
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January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
#32...
Hah! I didn't know WHAT kind of revenge you were cooking up
with that 'unbuttoning of the shirt' part, until I read further. :-]
I was like ''what' tha' hell??'
But that's a clever curse there....and since 'romance' WAS mentioned, when
are they going to get to the good part of their relationship? Hmmm? :-)
Hah! I didn't know WHAT kind of revenge you were cooking up
with that 'unbuttoning of the shirt' part, until I read further. :-]
I was like ''what' tha' hell??'
But that's a clever curse there....and since 'romance' WAS mentioned, when
are they going to get to the good part of their relationship? Hmmm? :-)
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not sure why Blaise can't strike at Harry still. That curse seems to only keep him from striking at Draco.
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Doesn't sound like Blaise will have a happy life. Harry & Draco are still just not on the same page are they?
Better than they were though.
Better than they were though.
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January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
soooo, they're thinking the items they're after are elsewhere? otherwise they'd be a lot more careful about malfoy manor going up in smoke. Still, sucks to be that guy. I don't think they're doing him any favours by keeping him alive. can't be much fun having a buncha different somebodies wanting a piece of you not including the ones who already have.
har and draco are finally getting into the swing of the partnership thing.
har and draco are finally getting into the swing of the partnership thing.