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for The Name I'll Give to Thee

by Lomonaaeren

person moodysavage
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want to read the next chapter!!! I have been dying to know how strong Harry is because it appears different at different times.I really liked how he helped Lucius too.
person SP777
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #36..

Wow! Another update in a few days O_o...*sings* this girl is on fi--re!

Anyway, I had to admit you made care about Lucius' plight, I hope Harry's
spell really is impenetrable...and those things get taken care of soon. You've
read the books right? Did you ever feel that Lucius was a nasty piece of work in
the beginning?

Why do I get the feeling you were holding off telling just how much magic strength
Harry actually had until the middle of the story? :-)
person Diana
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person polka dot
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is a bad man, but I like him. I hope he gets out.
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa seems adamant that Draco could take Harry's money and then guilt him into the rest without the marriage. No, doesn't really work that way. I mean, Draco might have been able to do that, but then he wouldn't have such a loyal, powerful, and handsome partner on his side. Which is Draco's point that Narcissa seems to just want to ignore. Part of me does wonder if they will annul the marriage after five years, but I know that Draco really wants to continue on the family line as well. That's a tricky thing. And I like that the Head Auror still likes Harry, even though Harry left the DMLE. Shows that Harry was a good Auror, despite everything else.
person SP777
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #35..

1. So, is Halloway the type of man Harry can depend on when things start to real
tight or is he too 'by the book' to be depended on?

2. Will Narcissa get some of her 'youth' back?
..and I know it will be awhile before she decides to warm up to Harry.

3. I'm surprised there isn't more focus on who stabbed Draco at this point...why?
person Diana
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter and this line in particular stood out to me:

"You know how bad the prejudice against former Death Eaters can be.
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that Harry and Draco are *talking* to one another now about the issues that come to them as couple. The thing with Narcissa asking for Lucius to be free is a bit much, but I think that Harry's decision to check on Lucius because Draco's torn about his father is the best for their situation. Oh, yes, and Draco should have stayed for the nap. Just saying.
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, as always!

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