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for The Name I'll Give to Thee

by Lomonaaeren

person Diana
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person delia cerrano
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm maybe Narcissa might be more understanding? in accord with Harry & Draco? than it seems but she would not allow her self to show it. Maybe...perhaps? Nice to see Draco appreciating or understanding more about Harry. So many take him for granted or take advantage of him.
person Polka dot
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Harry stood up to Narcisa it's nice to see him not bow to every Malfoy.
person Rina
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are we finally being gifted with some REAL intimacy now? I keep up with both this fic and Reign of Silence so I sometimes get both couples mixed up. At least this one gets to enjoy so hanky panky without having to worry if one of their enemies would ambush them in their own bedroom and spout nonsense about them being punished by pure, unadulterated light. Ugh, gag me with a cactus.
person SP777
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #41...

1. Harry has some work to do when it comes to having Narcissa seeing HIS side of things
& it was a little harsh his reasons and truths to her, but hey...

..and yes Shepherd is an annoying little fly.

2. Now Harry & Draco need to reconcile a little bit, after all they had their own small
disagreement about Shepherd that caused a type of uncertainty between them, despite the
united front.
person delia cerrano
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa is just too stuborn for words!! She just refuses to understand. I'm glad that I think that Draco is begining to.
person Diana
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter forty felt rushed to me. Interrogating Greengrass one moment, then the next the 'quick' sex. I loved this chapter none-the-less.
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, yay for Draco's turn ons and jealousy.

And that memory charm/curse was ingenious! Nice work. :D
person Rina
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your sex scenes are hot, as always. Now they can't annul their demi-marriage even if they wanted to which is a good thing because I seriously doubt that they would be able to find partners that are as perfectly matched as they are to each other. I like that you make allusions to the fact that Harry does have a dark side to him, seeing as how the Sorting Hat was going to place him in Slytherin, and it's always a pleasure to see the look on their enemies' faces when they realize that this goody two-shoes Golden Boy may actually be a competent and formidable opponent after all.