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for The Name I'll Give to Thee

by Lomonaaeren

schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that lotion scene was sexy as all get out... especially because neither of them was trying to be sexy.
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love the story and it is taking quite an intriguing route, but will we be seeing more of the strong willed harry soon? I could honestly understand the guilt he is feeling and he has a massive hero complex but he seems to take things on the chin one too many times lol. And while i was just browsing through the reviews i came across the one 'Christopher' left and i gotta say.........it was harsh but harry did do what he did to save the world and while i don't see anything wrong with him compensating Malfoy for his troubles in any way he feels he can but he is going above and beyond to accommodate Draco here and should find his balls and lay down a few ground rules for Malfoy. Just an opinion, not a flame, I genuinely like this story and feel it has a lot of potential.

(waits patiently for next chapter)
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, as symbolic trust building exercises go, I'd say that was a success... sort of.
person Nightlo
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such diverse ideas of family certainly bring conflicts, there would be no 'conquer' over brothers/lovers...Draco really has lots to learn about Harry
person delia cerrano
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Harry & Draco are going to get together & have a real married life I hope? Ilove them as a couple so much. They are such a contrast to each other - perfect as they learn that they care more than they knew & have many shared qualities, needs & habits.
person js
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of Draco trying to go for an alliance with Harry better than Draco trying to conquer him.
person SParker
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

1. LOL...I loved the title of the chapter, maybe you should do
'The Demi-demi & a half Marriage' as a joke. :-)

2. Cousin-husband...man I thought I've read it all, but apparently
there is always something new under the sun & why isn't Harry's height
affected, shouldn't he be taller or is he?
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco! You are in for one hell of a ride!!!
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that has got to be one of the most dramatic demi marriages ever! Keep with that idea draco, har has never done well with being conquered... alliance now, that's a whole different story. What happened to the serpent peacock? Crispy critter?
It will be interesting to see how his already connected ness to malfoy alters the general ceremony out look.
person polka dot
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK looking different would totally suck. Who wants to be pointy?