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for The Name I'll Give to Thee

by Lomonaaeren

schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now isn't Harry glad that he didn't invite Hermione and Ron there to see them naked? lol
person Nightlo
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...what will happen to Harry? Expel??? Please update soon.
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
person unneeded
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo annoying. i want to review but the site isn't letting me.
ah, that one little sticking point huh. I wonder how much of a difference that will make.
person SParker
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

Is that the barrel of gourmet cheese rolled in pecans, with
a pink center. If so, that's some nasty s***! :-p

But I like this type of 'marriage ritual', can't wait to see
what you have planned for the actual marriage.

Oh and by the way, thank you for the cliffhanger! *big thumbs up* :-D
person addiena saffir
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don't plan on making any more changes to Harry than necessary because I always find it weird that one character practically becomes someone else and then the other falls for them. Makes it seem disingenuous to me.
person SParker
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

at times like these, I wish you would update twice a week.
by the way, do you write chapters in advance now or as you go?
person Nightlo
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...By showing humble and acceptance, Malfoys welcome the new addition of family members...they do value family much.

Will anyone attending the demi-marriage ceremony?
person js
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that last lotion sounds really decadent. It's amazing how intimate it sounds without either of them doing very much.
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but this story does just not make sense. Harry and the others did the ritual to save the ENTIRE world from the Dementor Ghosts. In that case, if I was Harry, I would tell Malfoy "Hey, I will help pay for your mother to recover. I will buy you a new wand. I'll even pay you X dollars for your misery. However, marrying into your family? FUCK NO! Go screw yourself!"

I have a strong conscience but even I wouldn't agree to this insanity and neither, by the Harry in books, would Harry Potter. Just too OoC.