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for The Name I'll Give to Thee

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow after that ceremony, can't wait to see what divorce is like 5 years from now.
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Draco is sure he can give Harry a family but not love. I wonder who will be more surprised when it proves to be something different?
person delia cerrano
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait till they start to try to actually live together! They will either learn how hard each has had it & either learn they can lean on & love each other or go down in the flames of other peoples thoughts & wants together. Hope we get to watch them start to get to know & trust each others real self.
person SParker
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

You're making me feel like I'm the fastest reader. :-]

Sooo, what did Draco mean by 'that's enough'?
person unneeded
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, talk about intense moments. I wonder if draco recognized that instant, where har was offering him self up to die for everyone. No wonder he holds his friends so close. They're all he has left. things from here on out are going to be most interesting.
person Nightlo
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...Waiting the explosion of the public...
person asiacheetah
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow Harry really was thick by being so obstinate and not seeing what Malfoy was trying to do as the mist were hovering one step away from gobbling them both up.
person SParker
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
#8..

Okay, that was short.

Have you ever thought of doing 2 chapters in one?
person unneeded
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
bitey mist... bloody hell, whose good idea was that. Did those previously poisoned Malfoy 'spouses' make it that far? Poor buggers.
I like that har was only willing to compromise so far. I don't think he could have bent much further and still stayed true to himself.
person polka dot
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry isn't too pointy. not a good look for him