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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, come, at once huh. that sounds ominous.
well, bummer. What are Teddy and Andy living on? Are they still around? I can't remember.
neh, if/when they divorce would har get some of his vaults back or do the Malfoys keep them for the trouble?
it seems har and draco's ideas of duty don't really mesh but har is doing his best. I get a sort of 'marking time' feel when har is in the manor. It's not really home, it's a duty he's doing and his real life is elsewhere.
well, bummer. What are Teddy and Andy living on? Are they still around? I can't remember.
neh, if/when they divorce would har get some of his vaults back or do the Malfoys keep them for the trouble?
it seems har and draco's ideas of duty don't really mesh but har is doing his best. I get a sort of 'marking time' feel when har is in the manor. It's not really home, it's a duty he's doing and his real life is elsewhere.
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #13..
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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the chilly interaction between Draco and Harry. Definitely reminds the reader of who we're dealing with here lol. I gotta admire Harry's determination to make this situation work. Looking forward to seeing how the situation with Narcissa goes. The detail you went into for her condition was interesting. Details really do make a story :) Thanks for updating!
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #12..
I meant...having this chapter told entirely in Draco's pov, But
when I think about it, it doesn't seem fair.
...and Harry is being a bit obssessive, isn't he?
...AND it kinda feels like Harry & Draco are kind of orbiting
around each other, like they don't know how the other will react
if someone winds up saying the wrong thing.
Also, will they do anything remotely fun together in the coming chapters?
After all, they have 5 years..
I meant...having this chapter told entirely in Draco's pov, But
when I think about it, it doesn't seem fair.
...and Harry is being a bit obssessive, isn't he?
...AND it kinda feels like Harry & Draco are kind of orbiting
around each other, like they don't know how the other will react
if someone winds up saying the wrong thing.
Also, will they do anything remotely fun together in the coming chapters?
After all, they have 5 years..
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow it's a marriage made in hell. Harry is a desperate housewife
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, on the plus side, at least draco didn't tell him he couldn't go. What happened to the black vaults. Did har get them and did they get handed over too?
well, at least har is trying to be co operative. For a slyth draco is sure light on the tact though, with what he expects. I understand he's worried but i would have thought he'd be more subtle than that.
well, at least har is trying to be co operative. For a slyth draco is sure light on the tact though, with what he expects. I understand he's worried but i would have thought he'd be more subtle than that.
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww this chapter was cute as a button. And yaaaay to Harry getting some kick ass verbal on Daphne.
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad the marriage ceremony is over & the reception, I guess you would call it, over also. Now maybe we can see them getting to know the real them & start getting closer...turn the demi marriage into a real marriage. And what was that remark of Daphane about? Is she planning on getting it on with one of them?
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Happy are the days that you update! I wasn't sure what to expect from the dance scene, but it was spectacular! I'm a terrible dancer so I can definitely commiserate with Harry. You definitely conveyed how awkward it is to dance when you don't have a clue. Thank you for accurately portraying the dexterously challenged! I liked the verbal sparring with Daphne Greengrass as well. Looking forward as always to your next update!
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like that you can switch points of view so seamlessly. I love that I can read about both of their reactions to the evening without being jarred by a change in point of view.