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for The Name I'll Give to Thee

by Lomonaaeren

person magentah
schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Risky move on Harry's part, but I'm so proud of him for speaking his mind. Let's see if it wasn't too much! Thanks for updating so quickly and sharing this story. :) Looking forward to the next chapter!
person delia cerrano
schedule March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You tell her Harry! Nicely said. She wants all the benefits but doesn't want to pay for them. He has a blood relation in mind as an heir? Maybe Teddy? Doesn't he have some Black in him?
person BAFan
schedule March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 43

Woo-hoo! Take that, Narcissa, and way to go, Harry! Loved the sex scene too. *fanning self*
person Rina
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think that this might be the first time that Narcissa has been called a rude and evil bitch to her face and it was quite humorous to watch her gaping like a fish for once. Sometimes when dealing with a Malfoy, especially staunch Slytherins like themselves, you cannot use sublety as your only weapon because it is something they know extensively about and will use to their best advantage. Sometimes a little truth, honesty, and bluntness goes a long way in throwing them off balance and knocking them off their high-horse. Also I love the "lovemaking" scene in this chapter. 'Twas very smexy and hot. Now if only you would extend that same courtesy to your other fic, "Reign of Silence", I might not have to hunt you down and force you to stop torturing them and give them both a little TLC to enjoy.
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww so cute :)

Nice little chapter there indeed.
person laceyp
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please update really soon
person SP777
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #43..

YEAH!!! Harry = 3 pts., Narcissa = ain't got shit on the scoreboard! :-D
I think this was the best confrontation I've seen out of Harry yet.
I bet you banged your head on the keyboard to make it work. :-)

It's about time, cause she had it coming! :-)

Harry makes a better Malfoy than the actual Malfoys themselves...too bad
Lucius wasn't there to see THAT one.

Oh, and the intimate scene was lovely as ever.

Good job author!
person Diana
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Bravo Harry and Bravo Lomonaaeren!
I love fics where Harry is bold and stands up for himself.
person moodysavage
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo! Me thinks it will be a very good evening