AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Name I'll Give to Thee

by Lomonaaeren

person Snow
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nice! I love how the story is slowly unfolding days at a time. I can't wait to see what comes next!
schedule November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wheeee Draco is falling! Whahaha, I cant wait to see what happens when he figures that out. Poor Harry! xD

Great couple of chapters there. Thanks for writing.
person js
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad they're learning to communicate with each other. I had to smile when Harry felt such relief that he didn't have to control his emotions in private.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So they really do feel something for each other. I wish they would work on a real relationship between them & try to figure out how deep & how far that relationship goes or could go. After all they've known each other since they were 11 yrs old and constantly if nastily interacted. So there had to be a good amount of passion worked up over the yrs or they would have been bored & not so involved in picking at each other. It will be interesting to see Draco & Hermione & Ron try to get along & maybe work on getting Draco back in society in some what the same as Harry is doing.
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The idea that Harry is no where near as powerful as Draco had thought is a recurring theme and I have to admit I am very curious to see where that is going. I like that it is a subtle background thought that Draco keeps having. I also wonder how much of that thought is true.
person SParker
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Number #111 reviewer..go me !
************************************

about #20...

1. But it
person alexkdp
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chappie. Ossy seems to on mood swings just like Draco. I wonder what's the deal :p can't wait to find out. Thx for posting! ;)
person alexkdp
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
im so curious to know the precise nature of draco's desire. haha. i live for those bits. great story. keep it up! :)
person delia cerrano
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like Draco is getting what he asked for or thought he wanted & now it isn't as satisfying as he thought it would be. Maybe now we'll see some REAL interaction between them...They can maybe get to really get to know each other. Lots of maybe's to think about.
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
draco has rather a point there. despite har's strength, he hasn't been treating the manor like a home but rather a duty. he doesn't relax there nor does he give anything of himself except what's required of him. it's almost like he's treating it like a job, like penance, so draco get's nothing of him but what he demands. har never initiates anything unless it's a life or death sitch. he's just reacting to what's around him... no wonder draco is fed up. It would indeed be like living with something like a cross between a body guard and a minion. definitely not family and no where near a spouse... except possibly a trophy wife.
it'll be interesting to see how har reacts to this. i mean, he is trying, he just doesn't realize what he's doing so much.