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well, that's one enemy properly identified... and at this rate, considering both har and draco's responses (who wouldn't be a bit scared about having their heart crushed) i don't think this marriage will stay demi for much longer. ^^ well done ossie for getting har to eat, even if it was only a bit of cake. draco took the revaluation of har's potential quitting and who convinced him pretty well too, but maybe that was just cause he was distracted. :P

...I don't know, I have the feeling of stockholm syndrome...some kind of forced love between them...

Update soon!

YES!!! At first in the dining room when Harry made his confession, I thought that, "Finally! I get the pretty boy, lip-lock scene." Then, when they didn't even so much as peck each other on the cheek, I felt cheated and sad. Then angry. Then sad that I was angry. Did I already say cheated? But the ending made everything better which made me happy that their pseudo-marriage ( I'm calling it pseudo because it's not real unless they start humping like bunnies. Still waiting for that scene to be written )is finally moving in the right direction. I think Draco is going to enjoy the fact that he has always had the power to bring down the Boy Who Just Wouldn't Die. Just give the poor, emotionally starved man a hint of intimacy and he'll be eating right out of your hand and licking your fingers clean.

Hmm, true. I need to not be hasty at accusing others. Oh, an exchange of confessions! Very interesting. How will Harry react to Draco's boldness? I hope in a positive way.

That was a bit mean to stop right where you did. Anticipating the next update as always.

Bah! You cliffhanger Queen! I love the story very much. Thank you for writing it.

THE...BEST...CHAPTER!!! I loved everything about it. Draco and all those touches that he does unconsciously without realizing the effect on Harry... Harry reacting so strongly to those touches because they just aren't what he's used to... and I LOVED how Draco would tell Harry that he is exactly what he wants... still not knowing how Harry reacted to that!

Draco may not have realized he had any chance at anything other than a working together kind of marriage... but now that he does... I love to see that he has totally accepted it and going for it. Go Draco!

...really looking forward to the first real meeting between Narcissa and Harry...BTW, Harry really needs to work on his pride / self conciousness, it doesn't fit for a Malfoy

about #27..

1. I thought I reviewed the last chapter. O_o ...oh well.

I'm so glad you did an honest to goodness confrontation from Draco
to Harry...without it ending in a godforsaken cliffhanger, because I
felt that moment between them needed an immediate conclusion.

..and then you STILL leave folks hanging at the end. :-P

2. By the way, how old are they so I can stop thinking of them as teenagers.

...and you just gotta love Ossy, he is a MESS. :-)

3. Oh and for the record, this chapter had a good spontaneous moment between them at
the dinner table and in Harry's room. What I really want to say, I won't say because that
will interrupt your flow in writing...and god knows you think too much child. :-)