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November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
its ok hun I hope everything works out with your family. thank you for the chapters
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the new chapter. But you posted it twice >.> Sounds like Harry got a little fed up with the whole searching thing lol Also, "har-har"? *shudders* poor guy XD Why didn't they get after Lavender though like they got after Molly for hugging Harry?
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it but you posted Chapter 8 two times
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
while the story line has potential...but it's not developed enough....you should think about rewrithing it.
at the moment i cant read past the begining of ch 2....it makes no sense you need to strech the story...it seems more like a summry then a story.... :(
(and i red the original...
at the moment i cant read past the begining of ch 2....it makes no sense you need to strech the story...it seems more like a summry then a story.... :(
(and i red the original...
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September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I am a new reader of this story. I'm reading the original (waiting for new chapters) and I love it. So when I saw this I thought to myself "Oh I HAVE to read this". I was right, I love it so far. It's a bit fast moving but still really good. As for Harry's mates, I have to vote for Severus and Tom! And an original character or 2 ;)
I really like how you made Hermione one of Harry's dominate mates! It would be awesome if she was somehow one of the babies "fathers"
I eagerly await the next chapter!
I really like how you made Hermione one of Harry's dominate mates! It would be awesome if she was somehow one of the babies "fathers"
I eagerly await the next chapter!
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All of the above
All of the above
I can just see it now, what with all the Drama in Harry's life.
Besides he is powerful so he needs many mates to ground his power.
And they could be his own army to save him from Dumbledore what with all of his schemes.
He needs a lot of mates to keep him out of trouble.
All of the above
I can just see it now, what with all the Drama in Harry's life.
Besides he is powerful so he needs many mates to ground his power.
And they could be his own army to save him from Dumbledore what with all of his schemes.
He needs a lot of mates to keep him out of trouble.
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story and am looking foward to reading more of it.
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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, nice start. I hope the chapters get longer eventually. :) Hermione as the first mate was a good twist. I'm kinda rooting for Severus, 'cause I really like him and Anthony seems pretty cool too.
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August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story, but I think that you could do with a little more character developement. The people can feel flat or one dimensional if you don't get into their heads once in a while. I do love that you made Hermione a Draken. She usually gets overlooked in these types of stories.
I personally vote for Johnny and Severus to be Harry's alternate mates. I adored the visual reference that you gave.
I personally vote for Johnny and Severus to be Harry's alternate mates. I adored the visual reference that you gave.
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August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
first i congratulate you for your attempt however i fear this story does not live up to starlight massacre's rise of the drackens as the story is less interesting in the fact that you get to the resukt you wabt far to easily.