rate_review Reviews

love this story all ready can't wait to finish it

Awesome!!!!!

I like the fresh take on the drackens theme. Other then I feel that you could go into some more detail, I think it's wonderful. Great choices but would like to know more about your original characters. I like the family history for 'Maria'. Kudos, and can't wait til your next update.

:) Hi! good story , i see resemblance with the story of star but see difference to so is good.

I was thinking if Harry can go to see the chef Goblin at Gringotts wit what Ron as write of Dumby paie him wit the money of Harry and ask for reprisal from them 2 ?

Write more it's really good

I was actually looking forward to reading this story. Im totally in love with Rise of the Drakens, and figured this would be interesting; ya know a total twist or maybe even a totally new plot. I was really disappointed. Understanding that you have permission from Starlight, I was still hoping for some orginality. There is some in the number of mates, who said mates are and the evil Dumbledork/Ronnikins ( which i LOVE to read.. after all how can Dumbles expect.. err wait not gonna rant);but in the end, it still has a taste of Starlight's Rise of the Drakens as in so far as the plot that I can see. Many of the scenes are a bit more rushed in wording, but they seem to me, her scenes in your words.

This isnt a flame, just a statement of fact as I see them. I may not know what Star was thinking, but I would assume ( and as a writer myself I feel this way) that she felt you would take her idea ( or I should say the orginal owner of drakens idea anyway) and twist and turn and all the other good ( or bad ^_^) things one can write and make it your own.. not take her story chew on it and spit it out and call it your own.. Orginality after all is a beautiful.. twisted.. wonderful thing to behold.. and so damn interesting to read!

Anyway good luck with your story.

Ja ne,
Chrys

I like it. ;)
It is a very good story line, I do wish there was more detail and definition to the story. (I admit I am picky about what I read and normally give up if it doesnt draw me into the world of it completely, BUT i really like the story idea so im gonna keep reading! :D

Update soon please :D

I am sorry that you are not feeling well. I hope that you feel better soon, and the story is amazing so far.I am excited to read t next chapter.

I wouldn't stay at that school for nothing.

seems good so far