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schedule September 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Aww. I really liked this story. This was AWESOME!!!! It was sweet, funny, romantic, and cool. I really hope you continue this story. :)

Please write more!!! 

If you don't want to write a full-time story, then perhaps only do a few more chapters? :)

I'd love for you to at least write a chapter taking place a few months after this story, so we can see how their relationship is going. Then you could also do chapters for when Harry and Hermione are at Grimmauld Place in Deathly Hallows, when Ron leaves them during the Horcrux Hunt, when their at Shell Cottage, when their mourning their dead friends after the Battle of Hogwarts, and when they get married. Then maybe you can do a 19 Years Later Epilogue. ;)

Please, please, PLEEEAASSE continue this!! Pretty please! I hope you do. This was great and we would all love to see more.  

schedule January 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

An excellent short story with a lovely steamy scene.

person AnonyMouse
schedule November 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Did you update the wrong story?

person penghost
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good shot!

Was about time too!

I just would like to know how it got on!
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! a story by you without a single Slytherin in it? Gasp! the horror! lol

But seriously, I loved it. As always your beautiful use of vocabulary has me floored. Well done and thanks for the share!
person Mrs_HH
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That were nice...*wanders off whistling a happy little tune*