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It is good to know there is a reason for that. I say after winter break so that Severus and Lucius can get use to the new situation.

Nice I was a little confused at the begining But I love what you have done. Until next time..

Hermione is an idiot. Why would she send that howler to the past. I thought she was a smart person. Love the new chapter but I would love to slap Hermione.

Okay, here I am, back for more, because although I think parts of the plot need some work I love me some sub! Lucius. Really, there are far to few storys in which Lucius is a sub for Harry even though with his history its a given that he would be into some kinky shit. So yeah, great sex scene, the only problem I had was at the end when ...wait...Harry told Lucius he LOVES him?? WHAT??? WHAT??? Last chapter he still hated him for being an evil bastard and only wanted to humiliate him and now, in the space of a few days no less...he has come to love him?? WHAT?? Thats some serious stuff right there! But wait...I'm going to presume he is just messing with Lucius head. Psychological sadism. Because otherwise I would have to assume you are either a teenager or fresh off some 50 shades of grey reading ( fanfic abomination that it is). Sex does not equal love!!!!!!!!! Oh and on that note, are we going to find out how Harry became a well-practiced sadist at the tender age of 17 when he hasn't done more then use a leg locker curse until now?

Wait...Harry just used Snapes dads first name and Snape didn't even blink about it. Thats not suspicious for somebody that has only been there for a few days? and why is Snape so open to Harry when he spent 7 books telling nobody his private thoughts and motivations till the moment of his death?

Wow, Harry hasn't just thrown all his cards on the table, he has thrown his lunch bag, his satchel and everything but teh kitchen sink on the table at this point. Wouldn't it be wise to keep some of that stuff to himself? I mean if he hadn't oblivated wormtail by accident, Peter knowing about him and Lucius could have been big big trouble :/. Also, Harry just pointed out( in great and exact detail) that he is related to Regulus through a great aunt. If Regulus is as pure-bred and as knowlegable about his heritage as you would expect, wouldn't he put two and two together and get back to Potter? and yes, you should consider making Harry a bit more human. So far he pretty much has zero bad qualities and everybody but the really bad guys like him and trust him. His only bad quality seems to be that he can't keep his big mouth shut. Maybe that will mean trouble in the future? Also he seems very talented in new spells which I can't remember him ever being in the books...he always learnt a handfull and had to practice ages to learn them and then used them on a rota,lol. I mean he used wingardium Leviosa on a troll and he used stupify to kill Voldie so yeah...not an endless repertoire of new and impressive spells. Maybe 1 or 2 but ur overdoing it a bit.

lol I love this I think though that remus will figure it out his nose and all? lol

wow, major mary sue alert. Seriously though, har is overplaying his hand something chronic. I know he has a schedule to keep up with but you're rushing it and covering with rather thin excuses. Long and short, slow it down a bit... also, what's the point of getting luc the DADA position if he's going to undermine his authority? I mean, seriously, as a teacher Luc has to give commands to the students.

lol poor luc well more please

Please update chapter 3 soon.