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Review chap 8: Waaait,harry barely finished telling teh twins to pack up and come with him( a person that they had never met) and they just said " when do we leave?". they didn't even discuss it between the two of them??? Hell there wasn't even a raised eyebrow at each other? Seers powers all in respect but he is telling them that a hot married witch wants them and that he is taking them to go shag her.No suspicions at all that dark magic is at play?? Shouldn't he have given them some time to think it over? Come to think of it, shouldn't he have been more careful with giving away to much info( again). I mean what if they had said " We will think about it" and had then gone straight to Voldie? How did Harry know they were trustworthy??

Continued: Okay so Mione, Ron, Ginny and Draco are in the past. presumably to get Harry...buuuut now they are going to stay and teach a year. Wait. What? How are they okay with that? Wasn't the plan to take Harry and go? Wouldn't that have been the part where Harry took them aside and Hermione shouted and Ron complained and Ginny wailed and Draco snarked? Or at least put up some sort of fight? and I facepalmed when Hermione thought and then said " You've changed your name". Way to give the game away there. I mean if all the people in the room didn't already know he was not who he said he was that would have probably been the point where everybody cottoned on. Cleverest witch? I think not. Argh. can't believe she had to " think" before saying that.

Review chapter 9: Ah, here we go. I see some progress :) people talking things out and some sense being made of some earlier questions. I do wonder if its such a good idea for Harry to work out a marriage contract with Draco and Ginny as babys though. I mean isn't it lifes circumstances that bring us together? Won't Draco be a totally different person because he will be raised in a happy family? maybe Ginny only has a thing for bad boys or maybe she is the type that really has to nurture somebody...either way if they are forced together it might not work out so well.

On a different topic. I do enjoy reading the Dracken story on here( aff.net). Its a bit overly sweet at times and Harry sure is poping out babys like theres no tomorrow and theres no end to his personal finances.( realistically one has to wonder how your avaerge Dracken with 1 mate can even finance so many babys ( and in later years there are supposedly many multiples born).I couldn't even support 1 on my current salary :/ ). There be dragons I actually started reading but then had to stop. Don't get me wrong, the author is so lovely, she actually took my critisism to heart and changed some things but after a certain point it just became to much. The plot was *so* expected. I have been reading for over a decade now and that includes a truckload of creature fics. Some manage to still stay original but most become formulaic...If you want to read an incredible creature fic I would suggest the Indago series. It is incredible not only because of its plot but because of the character development. Draco is a complete arse at teh beginning of the first series and even at the end theres no super duper happy ending but kind of a realistic kinda happy ending. ( But yeah, by the end of the 3rd part of the series there is a final happy ending as well. ) Basically Draco discovers he has creature inheritance and Harry is his sub. Here the link: http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=8094 The other story I can only suggest as teh best damn Harry Potter fanfic you will *ever* read is Pendulum of Choice by Rushlight to be found here: http://slashcity.org/rushlight/hp/pendulum.htm . Basically Harry's world is demolished, his friends killed and he jumps through parallel worlds in search of a new world to call home. Also slash :) His personal journey is amazing.

" so that your father could pump her full of his willing seed" eeeeeeeew. I know Draco is not close with his mum but I bet he did NOT want to hear somebody talk about his mother like that. For crying out loud Ariggo, have some tact :/ You don't have to broadcast every thing you did in detail like that to their son.

Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

seriously... just get the house elves to go looking for him. I mean everyone underestimates the creatures and it's within their sphere of influence that the lord... currently harry, reproduce. Since he's having issues with that, send the little critters out to find him the counter spell, or locate another solution. problem solved.

as to what Mio's on about, I'm betting altering the past has altered the future and blah blah.

isn't it though... it's soooooo much more fun with smut. ^^

well, there's some emotional scars that are on the mend. I'm betting when they get down to this times version of Har and draco things will be MUCH different and for the better. I'm glad those 'tards have been put away. No one deserves what they did... no one.

Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

Love this story keep up awesome job.. oh btw thanks for getting me hooked on there be dragons harry lol