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by aneener8d

person Ashley
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the story :)
But i was wondering if you make Harry big and mention the size when hermione discovers it? Making him above average sud kick in here fact finding to see how big he is. Hes a hero :)

I hope that came out right
person Olorin the Maiar
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm confused...

Did Harry just propose to Hermione?

I mean, it sounded ALOT like a proposal, but then again...I don't really know what that was.

No, Harry didn't get down on one knee and pull out a ring, but taken in context, his speech did seem like one of those profession of love speeches that usually come before proposals.

I hope I'm not the only one who is confused. The "I just wish you
person shsa0702
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to new chapters, keep it up. I love the story idea :)
person Dark Lelouch3221
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and romantic at the same time. Please update soon.
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story i am happy that i can read the chapters with the lemons on here!!!
person GBTtown
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Arrggghhhhh! I hate angst! Why, oh, why must the HP universe be rife with angsty, immature character stories? My God, how do you even maintain angst after all that the trio has been through? Killing a few people, including a dark lord, would seem to put your emotional range beyond teenage angst!
schedule September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nigel was made up for the movies because the boy who played Colin hit puberty
schedule September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry
person penghost
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far!

Good pictures and crisp telling.

I hope the find their way together without stumbling along to long!
I also hope they do not get into very awkward situations.
Some fun is always appreciated though!

schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it, I think it has promise as a story, I've never been one for HP/HG but I think this story might change my mind, looking forward to your next update. D xx