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by aneener8d

schedule March 3, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Never have I read a story where you've made harry look like a bitch and hermione be so OOC. In what world would hermione ever betray harry to the point that you had her do here. You made drama for the sake of drama and completely missed the entire point of a functional harmony fanfiction and that is putting their friendship first and honesty. Congratulations you've just turned a great ship into something that would be found in a trashy romance novel written by a horny angsty teenaged girl with screwed up expectations of relationships stop writing for this ship please thank you

schedule March 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I quite enjoyed this, though I wish there were more steamy scenes between Harry and Hermione. 

person Josh
schedule April 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Now that is how a FF should be written!I must say the torture scene at the end, i about couldn't take it! I nearly threw up! WOW A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ MUAT READ! Thank you for writing this!!
person HBK96
schedule September 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
More, more and more..... The story is well thought out and written. The emotions, harry's turmoil and charcater perception; simply amazing. I hope you pick up where you left.
person Yuki Kim
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wwwhhaaaoooo i love the affection toward hermione:)
person Josh
schedule February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Love the story so far :) I was wondering if you were working on any new chapters?
person 2CRsgt
schedule July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it's too fluffy. Neither one would have been able too work through their personal issues while the war was on going.Hermione's big cry in this chapterwas to be expected after so many years of not knowing.
person razik
schedule May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pliz write the next chapter. This story is soooo amazing i cannot wait any longer to read wat happens next.
person pawsrule
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story on another site but decided I wanted the mature story. I am so glad you are committed to writing this the way you have planned it, I would be so bummed if you left it with only one more chapter. This is really good and look forward to where it goes. My guess is that Harry volunteered to teach Sex Ed class. Look forward to more.
person Biggar
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, keep it up! I'm really interested in seeing where this is going now Harry and Hermione have finally hooked up.
Something that popped to my mind that I think would really fit in this story (and I have no idea why); Polyjuice Lemon?