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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed, enjoyed and would love to read a sequel. I thought that male wizards could get pregnant yet you were saying that they had to find someone to carry a child for them?
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September 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay for happy ending y ness and lemons. I think you wrapped up most of the loose ends rather neatly.
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You left it at a good place and I feel that this story could be complete unless your muse hits you again for more of this story. I really liked how Harry and Serevus were in this story. Thank you for a great story.
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September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter and I loved the thought put into the battle. I can't wait to read more...
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September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
as final battles go, that one was fairly loss free. Yay for insider info and meticulous forward planning. ^^
I did spot a typo or two but apart from that...
I did spot a typo or two but apart from that...
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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
at least four misused words. a wrong their used, none in place of non, through instead of throw and dye in place of die.
apart from that... I'm glad the kids are out safe. the set up is ready, now comes the hard part, the waiting for the other shoe to drop.
apart from that... I'm glad the kids are out safe. the set up is ready, now comes the hard part, the waiting for the other shoe to drop.
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September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*bounces* More cliffies? Evil. Lol
Good battle plan. They needed one in the original. Hope it works!
Can't wait for Chap 12!
Good battle plan. They needed one in the original. Hope it works!
Can't wait for Chap 12!
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September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read about the battle, I think you did a good job making a setup chapter for the battle ahead. Can't wait to read more.
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August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good plan. Hope it works! Too many died in book 7.
Can't wait to see what comes next.
Enjoying!
Can't wait to see what comes next.
Enjoying!
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, that's promising. Is har a Horcrux in this? I wonder how they're going to get at yon mutant snake. Luc and Draco are well out of it.