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June 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Did you take it off of there bc i cant find it.
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really good Story. Voldi beiing at the mercy of Harry Potter, thats a really intressting plot. Cant wait for the next chapter <3
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November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have this set up to be an interesting story. I can't wait for you to update.
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October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is brillant! I hope you'll update soon!
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August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so harry's intrigued with voldie a littl emore than he probably should be and has no clue what it is he's actually supposed to be learning from him lol another nice chapter. one little thing, you still have a problem with possessives: "The Lord his face ..." should be "The Lord's face..." or just "His face..."
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August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am kinda curious about where you are taking this story
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August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interseting start, i look forward to seeing where you decide to go with this
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August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
and the interesting times really begin. sounds like voldie's gonna be in for a rough time as harry works through his own issues. one little thing, about half way through, your posessives (lord's, harry's, etc) became "lord his". keep up the good work