rate_review Reviews

Very nice. Although, I did notice two mistakes, I really enjoyed the story. I liked it. I love Lilly and Severus together but, I hate that he didn't openly admit to Lilly that he loved her because, she fell in love with James, and Severus hated James and then when Lilly died, he openly grieved for her, and still after her death, he held a lot of her emotions in and he still loved her. I hope to see more from this story, I enjoyed it. :)
~Tory~