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Is Severus Snape alive in your story???

@2. Update update!!! Love the story can't wait to read more!!!

DB

Hey! SO im really intrigued by your story. I dont know whether or not you have the rest planned out/ written, but it seems to me a good incentive for Hermione to go to Lucius would be if she found Ron cheating. And I'm glad you gave a reason for why Narcissa is out of the picture, and also showed that Lucius did care, and it wasnt just a marriage of convenience. It makes a good set-up for if they have a happy ending together, showing that Lucius can love, and loves deep when he does.

Anyway, good story! :D

Love the title, as nothing with Lucius is ever going to be "simple." lol I hope Hermione and Ron can eventually be friends when things go wrong for them, and that Ginny and Harry are there for her, too. I wonder if Lucius somehow sent that dream... Hmmmm More soon please!! Thank you, HG4eva

kinda odd seeing Ginny admit something like that considering the 'bad boy' in question almost got her killed in the past lol. its like "yeah sure he may have killed and tortured people and looked down on my family....but damnit the man is hot' lol.

@1 great story do far!! Can't wait to read more

DB

great first chapter. can't wait to see where the story goes from here. thanks for sharing.

cant wait for the update

I fell in love the first time I read it, its so simple yet so luscious at the same time. We know how stubburon our girl is but can she be pushed into a corner by our Lu? I can't wait to see it. And I like the fiery hex at the end it was such a prelude to things to come. Well I zee tori ask no I beg you to conintue this wonderful story, and let's see where things go. btw I love the long first chapter and how you displayed Lu and hermoine can't wait to see the others.


Tori
P.S
Don't be afraid to spice it up in chapters, with a little tension.