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by Dazzlious

person SL
schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept. I'd feel it'd take Hermione a bit more time before revealing herself (more logic driven), character wise.

The story could also be a prequel to a rewrite of Half-Blood Prince/Deadly Hollow.
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I never saw Fight Club either. But, I really enjoyed this FC. :-) Thanks, HG4eva
person gl101
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Very well-written and there was never a dull moment. I'm honestly a bit surprised Hermione took off her mask so early, but I still love that scene. Keep it up!