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person Grace
schedule January 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Such a good story, and a nice read in the rain ;) It was written amazingly, and very much liked the epilogue!
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't you have just let them get together properly in the end? You're so mean! Anyway I enjoyed the story until the end, I'm glad they got together and nearly laughed myself silly when Severus was tickling Remus in the dorm :)

Rosalie
person fanfic_gurl94
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! It was such a nice plot twist to the normal ones you see. I just wish it hand't ended so sadly for Remus and Severus (there just aren't enough stories for those two on the site sadly). Please continue the epilogue into a part two! I know not all readers are able to review but love stories so I'm sure there are more of us out there who want to see more. And maybe you can be swayed to give the characters from the first a happier ending in the second. Back to my point I enjoyed it, had to review and hope you write more.
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting play on Dumbledore's sneaky side. I liked the role Peeves played in the story as well. I do enjoy Snupin stories, so thank you for sharing, PW
person Sara
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I admit that I don't really like the ending but thank you for writing such a fic in the first place :)
person cLaWs
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Even tho it wasn't happy it was still good, when i said i love ya face its just something i say at times haha im just being silly. But if you do make part two i will make sure to read it.

take care and i hope to see other stories from you soon.
person Sara
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter :)
person cLaWs
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Eh no biggy Sirius is always Insane look who is his family but i was just saying it would of been all cliffy an gaspy if you had it to were he used the cloak like Remus did or something like a big prank that goes wrong (hint hint nudge nudge), but i still love the other chapter i really do i didn't mean to sound rude or anything i just had an idea an wanted to share but i should of been a good little reader (gives you the puppy dog look) i sawwy. HAH when i seen the line about her being passed around i nearly choked on my saliva awesome work i really hope there are more chapters to come or even different stories....oooOOo they have finally gone pass the kisses and hugs, Also good to see Lily have seen the right way and not the slurty one and hope she does give the arse a chance even tho he is a arse with messy hair. I KIND of feel bad for Sirius cause he thinks Remmy wont help him anymore since he has Snape its like a little brother being jealous of the new person in there big brothers life. I LOVE THE CHAPTER BTW GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
person Sara
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, loved that Sev punched Sirius in the face cos he totally deserved it!
person cLaWs
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY i love your face.......er anyway i like this and I'm glad Remus said something to lily and went to go see Severus...stupid women almost ruined Remerus. And i hope james begs for Remus forgiveness for saying he was a horny wolf...and good for peter for speaking up, BUT whats this is Sirius really serious (haha i wasn't trying to make a pun but it happened) I think someone is getting a lil Snape fever or will he try to do things to Severus to get at Remus or is that manwhore wanting Snape for himself..Hmmm!!! Anyway CLIIFFFY AAHHHHH cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.