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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@3 great chapter. The formatting is still wrong I still she. To also the bar across!! Can't wait to read more!!
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@2 like the story but it's really hard to read because you have to keep scrolling the page to the side because the formatting is wrong. Please update soon!!
DB
DB
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hope to read more soon! Wow. And I think you've captured Snape's voice perfectly, including the dramatic pauses.
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was hot! the tension is palpable and I love how in character your Severus and Hermione are! The only comlaint is a very small one...
The format is too large for the screen and I have to keep moving the width bar back and forth, slightly annoying but your story is soooo amazing that it is the only small complaint I have!
Can't wait for the update!
The format is too large for the screen and I have to keep moving the width bar back and forth, slightly annoying but your story is soooo amazing that it is the only small complaint I have!
Can't wait for the update!
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You must update soon this is delicious!
You might want to think about fixing the framing though, I had that happen to me in one of my stories, but it's easily fixed!
Loved loved loved this story and i am loving that it only the first in a trilogy! i can't wait to read what you have planned!
You might want to think about fixing the framing though, I had that happen to me in one of my stories, but it's easily fixed!
Loved loved loved this story and i am loving that it only the first in a trilogy! i can't wait to read what you have planned!
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yesssssssssss
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start. I'm looking forward to the next two parts. Keep up the great work!!!
Hugs, TCQ
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Hugs, TCQ
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would like to read more please update