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for At First Glance

by mysticxox

person DB1
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@20 lol lucky hermione and a pretty piece of jewelery with magic powers to keep her safe!!!

DB
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm can't say i didn't see this coming but it will be interesting to see the reactions of everyone else, especially Hermione's kids. Will there be any concern that she will love the child she has with Lucius over the one's she's had with Ron due to the bond ?
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very nice although i am interested on how Ron will react to Hugo and Rose spending time with Scorpius without his knowledge, since it wasn't really Harry's call to let Hugo be around Scorpius. A little bit more conflict with Rose would have been nice since it would have gone in hand with Narcissus plotting but i suppose this is as peaceful a resolution as could be reached. very well done.
person LittleLotte
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update! I am glad Lucius found her!
person DB1
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@17 great chapter update soon

DB
person LittleLotte
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story, I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder what Narcissa is up to and I hope that Hermione doesn't fall into Dark magic to solve her problems. That is a very slippery slope to climb. lol
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad I haven't been reviewing... but rest assured I have been reading this avidly and I am still in love with story!

I can't wait to see if Narcissa's plotting causes trouble for the new couple and I hope that they Hermione's nightmares are not going to come true... although her wand has a dragon heartstring core so I guess it's possible, and yes I am that big of a nerd that I know most of the main characters wand cores off the top of my head... and now i must go sit in shame for having admitted that... lol

thanks for the awesome chapter and I hope we see more of Rose and Scorpius bonding... that was adorable!
person CatnippedHeels
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My god you're amazing.. o.O
person DB1
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@15. Please please update!!! Cant get enough of this story

DB
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh Rose, so like her mother in regards to what could be considered 'rebellious' lol and an intriguing development, a mere nightmare or perhaps a foreshadowing of possible things to come? Awseome chapter and thank you for responding to my review.