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for Secret Affair: Love and Despair

by InuOniShi

schedule August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for the next update!!!!!!!
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm sigh wellll....i suppose there NOT 'Sluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttttsss!!!, and the heart wants what the heart wants. And i have noticed that there is no real bad guys in this story, just teens in love.I just hope that when and if the current relationships end that they end on a good note, cause while harry may not be an attentive lover and has alot of baggage he is still by wizard standards a badass who has dropped Draco on multiple occasions for less personal offenses lol. hopefully the boy who lived and the Weasley family are able to understand and move past old prejudices and give draco and to a lesser extent blaise a chance.
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ the feels in this chapter.

i'm in a glass case of emotion!!!....er ahem i mean....."THOSE sluuu....hmmm well there wasn't any intense cheating in this chapt sooooo..."THOSE....feeeeeeeellllllllllssssssssssss

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/162/b/e/mmd___right_in_the_feels__by_missbuttler-d536bk2.png
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm that foster thing kind of came out of left field and it seemed that you creating out of the blue or rushing to pile on their boyfriends faults to justify what they are doing. And in a slight defense of the golden trio, they kinda of had ALOT of shit to handle during the school years, for example not getting there asses killed at every turn and stopping an evil psychopath and ginny's current man once took a basilisk fang to the shoulder for her and saved her life lol. Still a very good story though, just felt a little rushed with this chapt and it is nice that Draco and Blaise recognize that the girls reputations and relationships could be seriously jacked up if their found out.

ahem, now....once again: "THOSE sluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttsssssssssss(ends with a hiss)
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I stand corrected: "'THOSE' sluuuuuuuuuuts!!!! again jk but i do sense some trouble on the horizon.

"It couldn't hurt to continue seeing Draco for a couple heated snogs, could it?

never tempt fate ginny my dear.
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In the words of Super Kami Guru, "That Sluuuuuut!!!" jk lol, nice start im interested in seeing where this goes.