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Please update!!! Or write a sequel!!!!

A very interesting story, not really a big fan of m/f but I have to say that I truly like this story, I can't wait to see what's going to happen with Ginny and Draco ^_~

Please update chapter 9 soon.

plzwrite more make ginny and draco harry bitchs

have harry turn draco in to a girl and make both draco and ginny his bitch

I really love your story! Ginny is so mature and doesn't have tantrums all the time like in other fan fics; it's so refreshing! I really hope you add the next chapter of this story soon!

Hoooooo boy! DID NOT see the punch coming, expected the tears but the punch was the last thing to spring to mind and it sort of felt like an excuse to vindicate Xavia and make her more of a victim and justified in cheating on Wyatt, and while I totally agree that she should have just told him the truth and left him(or just left him and continued seeing blaise without the guilt of cheating) the punch felt added to be the final nail in the coffin. And now I fear Wyatt is in for some serious Slytherin retribution lol. It warmed my heart to see the trio jump to Xavia's aid and tell Wyatt to take a hike and I sincerely hoped you wouldn't turn them into the uncool/holier than thou psuedo-bad guys of the story. While they should take Ginny's feelings into consideration their reactions are based on years of dealing with Slytherin crap (especially Hermione) and they have a serious hero complex and can't always see the other side of the story. And while Ginny is a saint for quote "forgiving" it would be hard for the trio to forgive when Draco and Blaise still give them the occasional shit and not show their true selves like when there with Ginny/Xavia. Every individual involved in this is guilty and could have done ALOT of things better/differently. Also Ginny is right to be concerned about Harry's reaction if your going down this path it may be best to tell him the truth and end things now since its not fair to anyone while in the safety of the borrow cause if he is within even a few miles of Draco I'm afraid there is going to be a serving of curb stomping with a side of de-fanging compliments of the chosen one lol. It's all one mass of grey morality.........and damn you I still love this story because of it, keep it up.

P.S: i am in no way a pro trio or pro Slytherin, i just calls it how i sees it.

sincerely,
That guy who has to go to every morally ambiguous story and ask questions and give opinions that don't belong on ADULT fanfiction.net.(bows and exits the review............holy shit this was a long one)

I'm not overly up set with Xavia, I know she only stayed with Wyatt because she thought Blaise would lose interest in her if he knew Xavia wanted a serious, exclusive relationship with him. I'm not sure what Ginny wants. In canon, she is an obsessive fangirl who be in love with "the Boy Who Lived' since she first heard his stories and spend most of the series desperately trying to get Harry attention. Now she has Harry, but she seems willing to throw it away. because he does not spend every second of his time and attention on her. The longer she waits, the more violent the reaction will be, especially if Harry catches Ginny/Draco in the act. If she had issues with the way the relationship was going, she should have talked to Harry instead of having a tryst with his hated rival.

Was browsing through the reviews just for the hell of it and i can't say I agree with "Fred-the-Man"'s assessment of Ginny in regards to her fan girl attitude since in canon it was only prominent in the second book and and after that she started to move away from her crush on harry and date other people until in the 6th book HE pursued and kissed HER. As far as I'm concerned during the second book she was just a very young girl who had a crush on someone who was a celebrity and her hero(not unlike ALOT of people in the real world) and it was nowhere near as bad or obsessive as people make it out to be. Hell at least she grew to admire and love the man behind the fame and mystique unlike other girls that have shown interest in harry. I mean jesus so she had a singing love letter made for him(the height of this so called "obsession"), big whoop, at least she didn't try to pass him some love potion or use him as an emotional crutch.

sorry if that came off as a rant and I'm not trying to knock Fred-the-Man as we are all entitled to out opinions its just that it REALLY grinds my gears when fans either create or exaggerate Ginny's flaws. She is not perfect but she is a step up from a lot of chicks in the potter verse.

now on an entirely different note and i meant to put this in a previous review, I take it that the sisterly bond Hermione and Ginny had in the books/movies has been transferred to Xavia and Ginny now or will we be seeing Hermione play peacemaker?

Ahh, while i read about Harry and Ron telling her she was not allowed to hang out with the boys and Xavia anymore i got this image of Ginny and Draco running hand in hand around the castle trying desperately not to be seen while trying to out run harry ron and Hermione...lmao...that would be funny...i am also suffering from being up for the last twenty-six hours...haha please update soon!!!!

Ginny needs to get rid of Harry, I would never let anyone tell me what to do.