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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I feel about this. I like it but I want a resolution. Why does Severus keeP doing it? What will happen if Hermione gets pregnant? What if she decides to end the pain all together and kill herself? Too many unanswered questions?
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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know you have this listed as a OneShot but I know I would personally love to see a second chapter. I think the confrontation about the memory charm could have been a bit more fleshed out (sorry for the bad pun it really wasn't intended) but overall this is a riveting OneShot.