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Well kudos on getting me confused. This chapter did not help the situation. But I'm still hooked on the story and will be looking forward to more! Keep updating please!

this is really really good I love it and am really eager for more keep up the brillint work pretty please.

Will all of Harry's mates be dominate to him? and just to clear up on my part Nathaniel is the mate for the snake blood, not the were blood. One of the enforcers is also a mate. Is truth a member of the Black family cause the description sounded like Sirius, while wicked sounded like a Malfoy. Asher is not a mate right cause where would that leave Jean-Cluade?

Hmmm...so is Harry the snake or is Nathaniel? I got confused with the leopard and the eye colour was just Nathaniel. So I'm thinking now that Harry is the snake and the purple eyed leopard is our Nathaniel. Ah Wicked and Truth, two gorgeous vampires! I love them both, such good swordsman and protectors.
Possessive Nathaniel is adorable! It's like seeing a cub roar like a lion! Unexpected and just so cute you have to hug it and coo over it! I feel like that with Nathaniel a lot.

I really love it.
I want to know when you update it please.

Well one of his mates is nathaneal Jean Claude Asher and someone else maybe shangdie or jamal

Oh I love it! This is turning into one of the rare HP/AB crossovers, that would be good ones! Still hoping for Harry's harem of men and can't wait to see some steamy sex scenes and some violent fight scenes! Will there be fight scenes? Well I suppose it's a given with Anita, there are always bad guys in the woodwork when Anita's around!
Oh! Huge question that I've forgotten to ask before. Is this Mpreg? I want to see Harry swollen with a baby! Even if it has to be right at the end, though of course this fic will be lasting for years yes? It's obvious Nathaniel is a mate now and he wants a baby so badly in the books, you can't deprive him of that.
Are there any inside bad guys that won't accept this...mateship? Like Gretchen didn't like Anita being with Jean-Claude and tried to kill her for being with him. Is there anyone like that?
Does Richard see Harry as a son, he seems to be the most protective and I know it said he treated him like a little brother, but does his wolf see him as a son seeing as he's always wanted a child too, he could have pushed those wants onto Harry as he helped raise him didn't he?
What about Anita and Micah? How do they see Harry? They practically raised him, protected him, kept him away from pack and pard business enough that they wouldn't even let their friends or enforcers see him, that's really protective, so do they see him as a son?
Anyway, brilliant chapter, brilliant story thus far, keep writing, I'm anticipating the next chapter!

StarLight Massacre. x

Well now you just have me even more confused! But a very good confused! Is Shang-Da one of the mates? And we he get a vampire? I really want him to have a vampire. And I agree with you about Nathanial, he's pretty much amazing. Keep up the good work!

LOVED IT!!! I really cant wait to see where this progresses :D

oh I love this I look forward to the following chapters thank you...