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HOT! Nathaniel being all growly and possessive was awesome!! So, does Harry realize that Asher and Jean-Claude are two of his other mates in the next chapter? *bounces eagerly*

again this is really really good (says this this while wipping away nose bleed) I really liked it and i really don't see jean caude or Asher minding much about what happned they may be more amused then anything. keep up the brillint work please cause I am following you both on this site and on pommedesang.

I love this story !
I usually lurk but you are driving me crazy with just one little tiny thing ... Nathaniel isn't a blond ... his hair is a reddish brown , the auburn you called it in a previous chapter . I know it's stupid and petty to harp on this tiny issue ( mine , not yours - your story , your rules ) in a magnificent story but it was driving me nuts not to say anything as Nathaniel is my absolute favorite of Anita's leopards . I will never mention it again .

You may be unhappy with this chapter but let me assure you I am not. It's was great! Soooooo hot! I love dominant nathanial! Still confused about who else will be thrown into the mix, but very excited to get more chapters like this one.

Ok, but wait... Nathaniel is already *dangerously* submissive. That's one of his main issues; he can't really tell people no. How exactly is Harry even more submissive to him? This worries me.

*rolls off the bed laughing hysterically* Oh I knew that's who's room it was! Granted I know next to nothing about this Anita Blake series so I can't offer much in the way of helpful guidance or anything, but I do like where this is going! Is Harry going to tell Nate that there is at least 3 others? *Okay I get the leopard in his mind, that's Nate, but a snake, husky, swan and wolf? That's more than 4, so does he now have 5 mates? Or did I misread something?* Keep up the good work, and even though I don't know the series, I can picture it rather well. I look forward to more!

Leania

well, nate isn't going to share well, we can already see this. Still, i'm glad har isn't going to be a doormat sub. I hate those. Dom's need to prove themselves first.
Can't wait to met the rest of har's mates. ^^

really loving this and can't wait for more. Also can't wait to see the dynamics between Harry and his mates

Oh this is great!!! I love it so much! I come to this site daily to see if there are any new chapters to this story! I have to say that I am not the most patient but still loving this! I am so curious about how this all plays out with Dumbeldore, Snape, Remus, and Sirius! Are all of them involved? How does Harry's necromancy factor into this? Anyway just want to say keep up the great work!

I love this story so far....I like that everything stayed dormant until later . I can't wait to read more!! Thank you for writing! :)