rate_review Reviews

Really, really intrigued and enjoying this!

Can't wait for more.

Very good Harry voice.

oh oh oh more please thank you.

Oh wonderful!!! I sooo need more!

this was much, MUCH better. still a typo or two (unless they were deliberate alterations like Gordic and Godric)but on the whole, far more readable. The story line is getting interesting too. Can har accept more than one of his courters and if the prophesy is to come about, doesn't that hint that he HAS to accept his Saraphim? I'll be luna's kids are part of the prophesy.

Oh I almost feel sorry for Dumbledore. He's messed with the wrong person.

this could be an interesting story if it wasn't so painful to read due to typos everywhere... seriously, error riddled much.