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I love this story and completely enjoy it. I wonder if Nagini should lie to Voldemort for Severus. It might be interesting considering how close she is to him. She could say Dumbledore is trying to mess with his mind or something. I'll have to go back and read if you set anyone up with him as there are tiny things I have forgotten. It was just rather cute with Nagini defending Severus and mentioning how much Severus understands her master. Not sure if Voldemort should turn over a new leaf though, but Dumbledore has got to go and Ginny. They should die together at the same time or something. Well I shall be on the look out for the next chapter. Thanks for updating.

No offense, but your story seems heavy on the whining and light on the plot. Is there a plot? Or is it 40 chapters of Harry whining about his childhood, while mindlessly rutting with Malfoy?

I've read three chapters and nothing interesting has happened. There has been no character or relationship development--your main characters just suddenly decided to like each other. Harry seems whiny, and you're using his past to try to generate sympathy from the reader--which comes off as forced and insincere.

The only way I can describe your story is 'flat.' it lacks depth.

Why can't Snape ask for help, I know that is not him but your the writer and i really don't want Snape gone either !!!!! so you'll figure it out I have faith in you !!!!!!!!!!! and you really need to get rid of Dubbles there ok !!!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!:):)

First I have to say that I don't know if I'm blind or what...2 updates that I never saw !!!! just read the whole thing again and I'm so happy that your still with the story !!!!!! please son't let Snape get killed I really like him...he's been though hell all his life and would be happy if he got some payback !!!!!!!! Well again Thanks for the this ...and I'l be looking really hard now for update !!!!!!! ):):):):):):)

Good

Wonderful..... Secrets are coming out all over the place....

And I bet more are yet to come...

Keep writing as life allows...

new to the story and it's awesome !!!!! Please update soon to see if all goes well...LOve to see Draco get in charge of everything !!! see you soon !!!!

Love it. Please update again soon.

I love your work.

Chapters 1-26: Great story! How come I haven't read at least a chapter of this story before? Love your characterizations especially.
Who is Hermione's mate that Luna talked about? Maybe Blaise?