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for Can You Keep a Secret?

by KusanoSaku

person VeltsuVI
schedule April 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

More please.

person Angel
schedule October 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love it so far

person BAFan
schedule July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ch. 25

 

//"It is in regard to your godson so I would hope you would hear me out.” Remus sighed.

 

//“Narcissa’s child?” Andromeda frowned.

 

//“Indeed.” Remus went on, “He and Draco had me brought to his current residence. . . .//

 

I think you meant "He and Harry. . . ." since Remus was talking about Draco.  

 

~Debbie

person Anonymous
schedule July 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really like the story so far. I know there are A LOT of chapters yet for me to read, so you may have already improved on this aspect.. But... They really do talk a lot during sex.. If they really are going at it that hard, how the hell can they formulate such long sentences? Also, as I said, the story in itself is really good, but it's a bit "jumpy". Like... They had sex on the couch, rolled over on their side, had a conversation and then stepped out of the bathtub.. When did they get in?

 

anyway, going to go back to reading now! (please don't take this the wrong way, it's meant constructively)

person Anonymous
schedule July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved it.  Looking forward to more.  More chapters.  Thank you for writing and sharing.  

person Anonymous
schedule July 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 38 is double at pages 43 and 44.

I like this story. 

person Anonymous
schedule July 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yeah, that old bat is finally out of the picture.

Good chapter.

 

BTW, you posted the last chapter twice.

person Anon
schedule June 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter and I'm interested in reading more, my only problem is that it's 3 years in the making. You have many WIPs. I've read Borderline and I Did Not Sleep With That Wizard. I'm not going to read this because it's frustrating that they are never finished. Maybe instead of posting new work or just a chapter here and there you should concentrate on one fic at a time and finish it. I really want to know what happens and have it done and not eternally hanging out there. You do good work, but PLEASE finish things.
person Niffler
schedule February 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Where did I missed their first time?? :O
person Niffler
schedule February 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Im just loving you story!!! Thank you for it! :D