rate_review Reviews

What a nice tying up chapter.

More chappies please

Finished the whole story...wow lot of characters and events (good/bad) to keep track of. A great job!! Always enjoy your stories sooo much. I feel so bad for Lucius now that we know that most of his kicking Draco off the family was due to jealousy because he couldn't have the person he was in love with (Severus you said). How painful that must be! Doesn't make what he did right but ouch it must hurt! Please say that baby Narissa loves Harry also. It sounds like the twin girls have picked one to be their parent & the other is an unimportant maid to be used if absolutely necessary. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Oh you are going to find someone for Hermione that will take the polish off Ron & his bratty Mrs I hope. Not crazy about her but she's not 100% bad - used by Dumbledore. Ron needs to learn a lesson & suffer a bit even if Dumbledore did twist him. Nemia also needs somebody. She is so young & sad to be by herself & pregnant. That song was so beautiful! Heartbreaking!!

Not a bad idea for a story, but the story is shallow. The characters aren't well developed, nor is the plot line.

Did you mean to name one of the girls the same as dumbledor's sister?

wow, dumbles really was completely nutters isn't he.
Poor Mio, taken and used like that. I hope Luna stands with and supports her. She'll need that now.
So many screwed over because of a half crazed old man with a god complex. I hope he pays and pays hard core. Those he hurt a re due for some compensation. As for Luc and Cissa... what total idiots. Since males can get preggers, what does it matter if their son marries/bonds a witch or a wizard. sheesh.
btw, some translations for the welsh/irish would be nice.

great start very interesting just to short more please......cookies for inspiration.