It was a sweet ending, absolutely loved this story.
This feels very rushed, and it is a little confusing in places. Your scene transitions were jarring, and left me going "wait a minute, what?" Harry being pregnant so suddenly seemed forced. I liked the idea of the story, but as it is, I quickly lost interest.
This is all happening really fast and it kind of makes it hard to read. Otherwise I think the idea is a neat one.
But Diggory wasn't in the competition in your prequel, Reforging Old Bonds
Thank you for writing and sharing. Enjoyed it.
Chapter 34 - Please add the proper citation(s).
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