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for The Forever Game

by uqui

schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whoa... blinks... a smut free chappie.
of course James can play his part, after all, as you said he IS a VERY good politician... the ability to fudge the truth and lie with a straight face/ your entire being is par for the course. Dumbles isn't going to know what hit him. ^^ That's one immortal that's going down.
I spare a thought of sympathy for Peter but lay the blame where it's sounding like it lays more and more, at dumbles feet.
So you decided to go with Cambion for Dumbles too... fair enough. Keep it simple and all. It least V will have a good idea of how to get the prick dead and make hims stay that way.
As 'meet the parents' meetings go, that one was memorable. Heeee, protective houseelves are protective. ^^
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I can't wait for that chapter and well this chapter was very informative and I love how smart politically you have made James.
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really liking the progress. I like that you explain things that some often leave out.
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I still love your story. Thanks for filling in the blank about Harry's parents understanding of his relationship with Voldemort. Until the next chapter :)
person delia cerrano
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed the story. Will there be more chapters? This was such an origibal & interesting new way to look at Harry, Voldemort & all the others.
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Blinks..., damn, missed a chappie. oh, well. You're right. the added sceens would have detracted from the flow of the story but I'm glad we got to read them anyway as they do add a bit of spice.

Well, booooooo. so, hang on, how does that work? So har just stays over at hogworts for the testing period? did he ever go full time? Was he sorted and do his younger sibs do the same? It mentioned a bro in third year yeah?

His poor parents. how long will they remain dumble pawned? It sounds like his da isn't unreasonable, just heavily controlled and possibly his ma too.

Most interesting. so whose doping har, for what reason and for whom? Does this mean Dumbles has a hint of har's true mate? Or is he just doing his usual, ppl's life as pawns, forward planning and plotting? Still, even dumble pawned I'm glad they can tell just how much V loves mate.
person djaddict
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love all these little tidbits - must have more!
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, are you going to get into what the Dark Lord does and finds out about what has been done to Harry's parents?
person Jan
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 13 soon ^_^
person Miri Daray
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Once again great as always! I always enjoy how fast you update (thanks for that :) )