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for The Forever Game

by uqui

person unneeded
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Har's doing very well, all things considered. that's one hell of an 'ick' factor to work his way over and through, but he's doing it. I suppose it helps that V is watching and helping a bit. It helps send his mind to more pleasant times.
sigh, little nevie is such an ignorant moke. i look forward to seeing what happens to him. ^^
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, brilliant story and I feel sorry for Harry. I can't wait for more of the ritual.
person unneeded
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*points the axe murdering crowd in the opposite direction from the one you ran in... after all, if they get to do their 'crush, kill, destroy' we'll never get the next chappie. That takes priority over maim you a lot ness for a lemony cliff hanger.

Good distraction technique har. Do what must be done but put your mind some place else.
person Miri Daray
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry... it had to be with Dumbledore didn't it... Can't help but feel bad for him :P
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil for leaving that chapter the way you did.... :) Hope you update soon, very soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
arrrgghhhh!!! the worst cliffie ever! more please and soon! :-)
person uqui
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Testing testing
person Jan
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please update chapter 17 soon ^_^



person Bill
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
5 years later, will we get to see when Harry becomes immortal to be with his mate forever and Dumbledore says goodbye forever. Love this story and LOVE the fast updates.
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very cool chapter, love your policially suavy Potter. And I can't wait for the next chapter.