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for The Forever Game

by uqui

person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still in love with this story. Now what happened to poor Neville I am curious
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
heh, i'm guessing V doesn't bottom very often. at least har made a good job of it.
tsk. *shakes head at luc. you're an IDIOT. if luc thinks he can strike at har's family with impunity, he's going to be flattened. not to mention if james falls, har is next in line anyway and as the DL's mate, yeah, luc is going to be envying dumbles his relatively quick death. Not to mention that his son is dating a potter so he may very well lose him as will with his foolishness. if he had a third of a brain, he'd trust his lord. He left james potter alone for a reason and it's not just that he's har's da. not thinking very politically there luc. in this case it's a matter of keeping your enemies closer. At least he knows where they are neh?
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the plot thickens...Luc is going to cause a lot of trouble
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
V's idea of therapy is very interesting. Sort of re writing the memories but with him in them. I think it would only work with someone you trust implicitly though.
I'm looking forward to the rest of har's collecting of his i owe u.
person mihoshi
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have really fallen in love with your story. The only problem I seem to have is your use of ths word butt. It just sounds in the context of the story, ass would be a much better choice. You could also use hole, entrance, or orifice. Other than that I love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*blinks... theatrical indeed... and somewhat gross. was the whole blood drinking thing really necessary? If it was why did he offer it to voldi first? Also, the DE's didn't actually get to see who har was and wasn't that a side purpose to the whole display? Well, har did say it would be quick... he didn't say it wouldn't be painful. :P
I don't blame har for needing comfort after that. while it needed to be done, it doesn't mean he had to enjoy it. Hell of a time for ick factor to strike though i'm glad har was able to overcome it.
heh, snickers, the look on lucs face when draco brings home har's sister would be priceless. Does lily do anything else apart from popping out progeny? Does she have a job apart from being a mum? whatever work she did would have to fit around having kids, they're up to what, thirteen, fourteen now? wow, they're practically repopulating the potter line all by themselves.

*tilts head in a cutely puzzeled manner? eh? I was supposed to be asleep? I don't remember. my legs have been a bit achy lately so i find myself waiting up while pain meds kick in... or just getting stuck into a really good story and the next time i look around it's three in the morning. >.< I'm trying to get out of that habit but it's so hard when there are so many wonderfully distracting things online. ^^
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you're a horrible tease you know that don't you. here we all are gearing for a nice hopefully protracted (but probably not)dumble death and we're denied! DENIED... oh, sure go and try and distract us with smut... actually that worked... on me at least but anyway. Die dumbles DIE! *repeat x 3 steadily getting louder. ^^
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
after every chapter, i just want more, more MORE!!! your writing of voldemort's feelings is lush, engaging, and oh so arousing. where can i find my own Dark Lord?
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter and I can't wait to read about the entertainment. I love how Harry and Voldemort interact, it is brilliant. Thank you for a geat chapter.
person Miri Daray
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay for smut! Can't wait to see how Dumbledore dies... dramatic.. straight up? Can't wait!